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Oh yeah, at chapter 52. sorry I'm answering this late.

oh, ok. I'm generally glad you like it. sure go ahead. Just don't take what I write out of context or get me in trouble with it. Don't know if you can, just saying. anyway, permission granted👍👍👍😁

Ok, The reason why the stars for this review is so high is because I gave full marks on updating stability. Now to the book. Honestly, I'm torn between like and slight dislike. I like the idea, I like the world itself, I like most of the characters and I like the tension between the MC and his girlfriend. The writing is fine, interactions are kinda great. in all these regards, it's top notch stuff. But it's not perfect. I get it's supposed to be a harem novel but Miss Mercury falling in love with a guy who she's never met before, only seen once during a live broadcast, and hasn't even seen his real face is too much for me. I'm not kidding. She literally says "Maybe, I'm in love with him". After just seeing his actions on one Livestream. It's cheesy really, especially when coming from a supposed Top Superhero with fame, cash and men at her beck and call if she so desired. I don't know about others, but for me it feels rushed and makes her seem like a simp fangirl or something. That's one. Two, i don't like the System. I'm a system guy, but i dislike those systems that generally interact with the user. Pls note, this isn't one of those systems that force tasks and imposes severe punishments. Like the overused Shortening of a man's penis or simply removing it altogether or outright obliteration. I would have dropped this during the first minute if it was. It did threaten with unbinding, but i can stomach that. (No offense. i hate tools that threaten their owners) by interaction, i mean doing things it shouldn't. For example, prompting user to open notifications, constantly reminding to start a Livestream, doing things like analyzing information, using facial recognition and cross matching, giving suggestions on who is responsible for what. It feels lame like the MC can't solve a situation by himself and is being pushed to do system tasks. I also don't like systems with tasks either. The system ability is the third point of my complaint. Livestream? really? Why on earth would a Livestream system exist in the world of heroes? Why does it require the MC to start a Livestream and display what he is doing to the world? Can't it just be a regular system? There is no direct correlation to the ability of the system and the power granting itself. For instance, those corpse extraction systems or absorbing ability systems. It clearly states where the powers are coming from and the direct relation. The MC starts a live broadcast, gets points when it's done, then buys stuff. Even though he is fighting off powered criminals, it feels too ... well, detached. It would have been better if he was the one actively going out in search for crime. No, the system even arranged where and when he will fight crime. For crying out loud. Most of you might not understand my complaints or feel they aren't noteworthy complaints at all. That's your business. These small details for me really spoil the overall feeling. It's a good book regardless. Worthy of the Four stars I'm giving it. I wish it was a more plausible system with a better ability granting premise. Hey Author, people like fantasy, but I feel like this innovation that's constantly attempted to make a novel different from the others isn't really all that great. (At least, i feel that's what you are doing) You don't have to make your book have a specific setting that makes it glaringly stand out from others. Even if the abilities and premise are the same as others, you just have to make yours better.