wishfull_thinking

I saw a lot of things I did wrong with the first 2 chapters I released yesterday so I decided to make the changes sooner rather than later. Thanks for the feedback provided in the comments. --------------------------------------------------------- Syn: 28 year old Silver Wilder was doing a re-run marathon of the Harry Potter films which he hasn't watched in maybe over 5 months and although he was a huge fan of the movies themselves he couldn't be bothered reading the books unless they FFs. As he watched the films he suddenly realized why he usually had long breaks from watching them... "FOR THE GREATER GOOD MY FUCKEN ASS, YOU TWINKLING WRINKLING BALL SAGGING BASTARD AND YOUR ORDER OF CHICKEN FEET!!!... sigh It would be cool if I was born there argh I still can't believe Ron ended up with Hermione the late bloomer... sigh oh well if there is a god or high being or even a ROB out there, somewhere, anywhere. can you maybe consider sending me to the Potterverse with 5 wishes? or if that's too much to ask than just 4 will do pleeeeeaaase?? Amen. ---------------------------------------- A sudden flash of light is what Silver's response received. ------------------------------------------- Did his prayer get answered? Will he get his wishes? The chance pick up Hermione even? Who knows? ------------------------------------------- AN: Decided to give this another shot, the previous chapters were too much dialogue for my liking and a few others. I got carried when I was writing lol anyway it is likely that I will get carried most times and for some reason I feel the need to cap chapters at 12-1400 words although I could write more. Is this short or long for a chpter? Also, yes, there will be a harem but nothing too exaggerated I'm thinking 3-4 seems manageable and a decent size so that no one gets forgotten later in the story.