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Okay great, thank you for responding to my concern! I love this novel, can't wait for chapters to catch up to the original, the last chapter of the original was amazing and I'm excited to read what happens next ❤️
"Copying talents..." Ian said with a dazed expression. "It's something unheard of in the thousands of years of human history."
I Stole The System!
Fantasy · Dragon_7454
Why does he keep talking out loud, really? I'm worried about what else has changed from the original, I thought it was rewrite not fundamentally changing the novel but maybe I was wrong
"Copying talents..." Ian said with a dazed expression. "It's something unheard of in the thousands of years of human history."
I Stole The System!
Fantasy · Dragon_7454
In the original novel, he mocked protagonists bad habit of thinking out loud during this part, now it seems like he's picked up that bad habit himself. MC was perfect the way he was
"Alan Lockwood..." Ian muttered to himself as he remembered Alan's sudden outburst in the classroom, his way of addressing the teacher, and his words after he got up.
I Stole The System!
Fantasy · Dragon_7454
I believe this novel has potential. It may not be the future you envisioned or as stable as you deserve but in my experience, that's life. I've had to re-imagine my future hundreds of times already. I'm not telling you to "get over it" or anything like that. Curse the gods, hate fate. I just want to say, whatever you're feeling now might be easier to deal with if you channel it through an outlet. Rage, resentment, sadness whatever. As far as I and your other readers are concerned, you're already an author ❤️
ch 16 Notice
I Stole The System?
Fantasy · Dragon_7454
Didn't he say that the system should never limit him? Then why is it allowed to punish him for failing missions it assigned? Or is it a different system from his system? I really don't like when MCs are manipulated by their systems
ch 0 8 Banner of war ch 8
Divine online: path of the patron
Fantasy · Trueone_king
Which realm is he in? Or are all three realms part of every galaxy? Are the realms even physical places? So far this reminds me of breath of creation but way more confusing and way harder to read... I might be reaching my limit
The galaxy resembled a celestial masterpiece, its swirling arms and radiant core drawing Hiroshi in with their mesmerizing beauty. It was the closest-looking galaxy to the Milky Way, a beacon of light and possibility in the vast expanse of space.
Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within
Fantasy · VegetaIsBadass
This is the third time you've explained the afterlife system this chapter, I feel the need to read it though because you could have changed something again... REALLY hope this improves in future chapters, like author said
In the Heavenly Realm, Paradise and the Death Temple represented two paths for souls to embark upon. Paradise offered eternal light and bliss for those who had lived virtuous lives, while the Death Temple provided a place of reflection and guidance for those seeking solace in the afterlife. Both paths offered opportunities for spiritual enlightenment and growth, reflecting Hiroshi's belief in the inherent goodness of all beings and their capacity for redemption.
Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within
Fantasy · VegetaIsBadass
Didn't you just say that the middle realm will have a reincarnation system? I hope these things are explained clearly in later chapters, it feels like you just changed your mind about the afterlife systems right after saying he finished creating them lol
"The afterlife system of the Heavenly Realm will be Paradise and Death Temple. The afterlife system of the Middle Realm will be Heaven and Hell. The afterlife system of the Ashura Realm will be Elysium and Underworld," Hiroshi declared, his voice resonating with authority as he divided the afterlife system of each realm.
Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within
Fantasy · VegetaIsBadass
Can't wait for next chapter! Please keep writing author ❤️
ch 12 Chapter 12 - Possiblity of evolution
Life of a Teenage God
Fantasy · Recklesspen
It's not just "sense of purpose," trust me *crying*
The journey ahead would indeed be full of challenges and uncertainties, but in this moment, as he witnessed the birth of a universe unlike any other, Hiroshi felt a resolute sense of purpose and determination coursing through his veins. He was ready to embrace the challenges that lay ahead, to explore the limitless potential of the cosmos, and to create a universe that would stand as a testament to his creativity and vision.
Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within
Fantasy · VegetaIsBadass
Like this see, you literally just told us the exact information in the last sentence in the above paragraph too. It gives me the weird feeling of reading the same paragraph over and over with slight changes and then occasional paragraphs with new information or useful things happening randomly dispersed in between... it's just honestly difficult to read
As Hiroshi's vision of the cosmos became clearer before him, his sense of accomplishment grew. The chaotic remnants of the Big Bang were dispersed and transformed into a unified, compacted mass. It was a small, yet crucial step in the process of creation that laid the foundation for the universe to expand outwardly from every angle.
Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within
Fantasy · VegetaIsBadass
I REALLY want to like this novel. But unfortunately, it feels like I'm reading basically the same thing (the same information, phrased differently) for four paragraphs in a row for multiple chapters... it really breaks reading immersion. I'll power through, hopefully this improves
But deep down, Hiroshi knew that taking that path would be a betrayal of his own potential as a creator. It would mean shirking his responsibility and delegating his authority to another entity, robbing himself of the opportunity to fully embrace the journey that lay ahead.
Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within
Fantasy · VegetaIsBadass
Really enjoying this so far! Please keep writing! ❤️
ch 14 Not A Chapter
I Stole The System?
Fantasy · Dragon_7454
Please upload the next chapter soon!
ch 15 Power system
I Stole The System?
Fantasy · Dragon_7454
She never even knew him in the first place... she pretty much just saved a few human villages on a whim lol
As the attendant hurried away, Erik allowed himself a brief moment of introspection. The image of the flaming angel, Ursula, lingered in his mind. Her abandonment had been a catalyst for his transformation and his resolve. He had to know: would she recognize him now, after all he had become?
The Guardian gods
Fantasy · Emmanuel_Onyechesi