Alright, so this is a review for the first 23 chapters. Pros: - Good dialogue - solid story and story development - good word usage - fun to read Cons: - blocky text, I wish the author split up the big paragraphs into smaller ones. - bunches of grammatical errors, luckily they're small ones but still very noticeable. I hope the author continues improving on his writing!
Honestly, it's decent in my eyes. GOH fans would probably enjoy it more since it's a fan fic and can understand what's going on much better. With some googling and wiki searching I managed to get some clue ins on the world here and there. The plot so far seems alright, but again GOH fans would probably enjoy it more than I have. Other than that, I hope the author improves upon their grammar and punctuation (there was also the rare spelling error) as it's a weak point. Good job author. 👍
While, I'm not into stories about the rich elites of society (no matter the age), romance, or princes and princesses, this one's honestly pretty good. The flow of the words is very interesting. The plot is pretty well put together and I think I have an idea of how it's going to end.
Such a great story! I'm incredibly impressed and that's coming from someone who doesn't even like romance novels! Major props give to the author for this one.
Yeah, I've been trying my best with my grammar but I'm not the best with it. They also didn't call the police because they didn't have any phones nearby, my apologies for not clarifying that error in continuity!
Pretty good for a darker tone story so far (currently 10 chapters). The descriptions and imagery sometimes irk me, but not totally annoying to me. It's a very different take on the isekai genre and I like it. I hope the author keeps going with his work! ^^
This is a review for the first 10 chapters: keep in this mind. Overall, I don't have many complaints rather than some descriptions here and there could use some work. Pretty great for an reincarnation novel.
Keep in mind that this is a review for the first 15 chapters: A very good read! Props to the author! Very engaging with very good characters and plot to boot. I'm excited to see where things go!
This a review for the first 14 chapters. Overall, the story is very good and set ups for a very good and very detailed atmosphere, often stopping to smell the roses with a calming smell. Though, I am not a fan of animal-based storytelling. That took away some enjoyment for me personally but that's not a detriment to the story in anyway as it still manages to be very high quality. Serious props to the author!
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original The Last of the Thundersouls
4.7
The Last of the Thundersouls is about a young 16-year-old boy who lives on his own, Rambone Lewis. His father was killed in an accident a few years ago and his mother is never home from her near endless stream of business trips across the world. When he goes to visit a friend of his, he runs into an unlikely event that will throw the both of them into a whirlwind of a journey as they uncover government secrets and conspiracies.25 Chs 21 Collections
Expert imagery and descriptions with a pretty good plot to boot. They're very well detailed and work great. We already have multiple questions brought to the table early on to keep things going the rest of the way. Only downside is the amount of grammatical errors there is sometimes. It's not anything too distracting, but I found it irking me a little. Props to the author and I hope you continue improving.
The JOKER
Fantasy · bunnyrabbit