it's good but there is too little chapter
your the only one
fan fact:if goku didn't ask zeno to hold the tournament of power,zeno would erase the low mortal level universe including universe 7 so goku saved the universe for asking zeno to hold the tournament of power I don't understand the hate of goku and you should do your research first
the story is good,but I think you should better your grammar
how about the specie's of zandor universe is like saiyan or kryptonian
I don't really like it your just forcing them but I'm not the author so I'll just enjoy the nov
one shot monk dyspo isn't thousands times faster than light his trillions or more and you should know that even in super goku in base at the TOP was trillions or quadrillion times faster than light and super saiyan blue goku kioken can even move in hit's time stop even if it is just 0.1 second
I'm just gonna be simple*This is good*This is better*This is a masterpiece*This is the best
Tales Of The Devouring Serpent
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