arik_redioan

1 years ago

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she did it as if* it was nothing.

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Twin Reincarnation: Epics Of The Worldline

Fantasy · H2Oz_Anxious

arik_redioan

1 years ago

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I will get* the first kill.

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Twin Reincarnation: Epics Of The Worldline

Fantasy · H2Oz_Anxious

arik_redioan

1 years ago

Commented

Sol sounds like wanderer.

Faking a cough, she spoke like a mother teaching her child. "Sol, you should stop having a 'Stay away from me! Or, I'l kill you!' face at every waking moment. Or you'll have wrinkles before old age."

The Villain has Perished

Fantasy · Ryukurou

arik_redioan

1 years ago

Commented

Shouldn't it be "my" daughters?

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GAME DEVELOPER SYSTEM

Games · NunuXD

arik_redioan

1 years ago

Commented

it should be subconscious

Kastor glared at Mykel and he knew that something was suspicious with Mykel, he also didn't like what he was doing to Lyneth. He unconsciously used [Magic] and the whole place became messy because a fierce wind suddenly appeared.

Destroying My Own Novel

Fantasy · Iqfauli

arik_redioan

2 years ago

Commented

you should use Grammarly while writing

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arik_redioan

2 years ago

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*feasting*

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arik_redioan

2 years ago

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*looked*

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arik_redioan

2 years ago

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*grips*

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arik_redioan

2 years ago

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it is a little confusing?

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