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Arbor = tree ?
Element: Earth/Water/Arbor/*****
Conquest: Rise of Futa Gnoll Overlord
Fantasy · HuaiChi
Thanks for the chapter. A couple of minor spelling mistakes but better.
ch 0 2 Prologue: A Goddess of my own II
Danmachi: Monster
Anime & Comics · InmateOfYharnam
Just improving on sentence length and comma and punctuation is my only nitpicking (from someone with english as third language, dont take it to heart if you disagree).
ch 0 1 Prologue: A Goddess of my own I
Danmachi: Monster
Anime & Comics · InmateOfYharnam
Very long sentence. Could have been separated for easier reading
Pushing open the old heavy door with a 'creak' she arrived in the tatami mat covered room everything was still the same from the racks with training weapons to her teacher sitting cross legged on the floor, however one thing was different than the days before. Next to the muscular middle aged man sat a girl, maybe 4 years older than her.
Danmachi: Monster
Anime & Comics · InmateOfYharnam
Nice start. There are some places where punctuation and the way you wrote some sentences could be improved, but seems like a nice start. :)
ch 0 1 Prologue: A Goddess of my own I
Danmachi: Monster
Anime & Comics · InmateOfYharnam
Because then he’s hung like a horse… why else?
I was assured that yes, that was a guy who genetically modified himself to have a horse's lower body.
What Do You Mean I'm The Captain Of A Yandere Mercenary Company?
Sci-fi · Draekai
The ones outside of my grandmas house are around a meter tall
Five minutes later, the potato seedlings had grown to half a person's height.
Starting from primitive world, building the strongest divine kingdom
Fantasy · Doubleyolkeggs
'Would it be rude to ask Professor Flitwick which parent of his named him?' Talion meanwhile asked himself as he made casual small talk with the runes professor. 'Female goblins are either much more pleasing to the eye, and his dad got really drunk, or his human parent is a freak - sorry in advance, Professor.'
A third son of prophecy (Harry Potter AU / Assassin's Creed lore)
Book&Literature · Nuclide
The wiki
'Would it be rude to ask Professor Flitwick which parent of his named him?' Talion meanwhile asked himself as he made casual small talk with the runes professor. 'Female goblins are either much more pleasing to the eye, and his dad got really drunk, or his human parent is a freak - sorry in advance, Professor.'
A third son of prophecy (Harry Potter AU / Assassin's Creed lore)
Book&Literature · Nuclide
Huh, who whould have thought we were in the 40k univers.
This book has been deleted.
Im not sure.
Thanks for the chapter. Does the name helolite have a meaning, or is it like kinda random? It sound/ is spelt kinda like heliolite (sunstone), but that wouldnt make sense with his "power" being anger and hate. Is like a mix of hell and hoplite?
ch 0 6 RUN!
The Persian King
Anime & Comics · AllMightyOne
Thanks for the chapter. Bro is reading the sith book lol.
ch 0 5 Live Free or Die Trying
The Persian King
Anime & Comics · AllMightyOne
Wasnt he stabbed in the neck? I feel like that would lead to death more than steady breaths and unconciousness.
As the sentry's struggles weakened, I gently lowered him to the ground, unconscious but breathing steadily. With deft hands, I relieved him of his provisions—rations, a waterskin, and a crude map revealing nearby landmarks—equipping ourselves for the journey ahead.
The Persian King
Anime & Comics · AllMightyOne
Σήκω σκλάβος -> Rise, slave. Εδώ θα μείνεις -> Here you will stay. Thanks for the chapter.
ch 0 2 Preparing for war
The Persian King
Anime & Comics · AllMightyOne
Thanks for the chapter. :D
ch 0 1 The Beggining
The Persian King
Anime & Comics · AllMightyOne
Translation:Rise, slave, or you will die at the hour of war
" Σήκω σκλάβος αλλιώς θα πεθάνεις την ώρα του πολέμου"
The Persian King
Anime & Comics · AllMightyOne
You -> your
"And like you lame t-shirts say you're gonna delivery me to Justice cause it's best served cold." Heatblast states, remembering that's what the shirt said.
The Boys: It's Hero Time
Anime & Comics · GenV