Dad_Dy

It's basically raw hentai. The cycle of being captures, being rape by yandere and escape play over and over again. New yandere and waifu gets introduced out of no where with barely any background, context or connections to the foundation of the story. The Mc is quite boring, mostly trying desperate to escape, scares, weak and submissive. His goal is to get alway from the yandere and trying to find peace. Simple goal is fine, but what matter most in good stories is the process to accomplishing that objective is what make story entertaining. The story is structure in a way that leave the Mc in a pretty hopeless situations. There is no progress. Sure he escape but later is captured and brought back to where he started. With lacklustre characters development of personality, growth and changes, this story feel plain. Although I understood this is a fantasy novel which mean realism is out of the window. However, you can get creative with the world all you want, but the thing that should stay close to reality is the human quality. That is the personality, emotion, growth, characters, and ideal of the people inside story that should stay close to realism. The humanity of the characters in this story is pretty black and white. The yandere simply obsesses with the Mc because his magical godhood. But why? Nothing else, it's just the magical energy of god inside that make the girls around horny of him. The Mc didn't even do anything. This make the yandere in the story feels like simple horny bots that were created with the sole reason of fucking the Mc, making them lifeless and not ambition and thus boring. If this is what you're into, just simple r-18, then go for it. If you're looking for good yandere romance and story development then this look else where.

The author knows how to write Yandere. Plus, the world setting is very fitting to present drama between the MC and the yanderes craziness. MC is cool headed, sigma male and mature mind compare to the weak and simp that I have read out there. I don't have any criticism so far beside that the world setting is a bit unrealistic ethical wise as the reason to why these dangerous inmate is allowed to lived, costing the government tones of tax money. But to be fair, if you drop some of your IQ (which most of us here is already on their last few brain cell) and ignore that part, the story is quite entertaining. The balance is just right between realism and fantasy I would say. I say this is gold. 8.9/10

Wow. This short writing really give you motivation to wake up and grow, not to surrender to the irrational and ignorant. It is the call to seek the truth and to become a better person, which is the act of helping one-self and the people around us. Hence, to be a better person is an act of kindness and generosity. This is a letter to humanity to wake up from it's ignorant. To seek growth, truth and kindness, and ultimately to be alive. Thanks for the reminder, author.