Targaryen_Official

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Targaryen_Official
2 days ago
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No one seems to be commenting on this, so I’ll say it: These last chapters, following Shiro's previous team’s match against the American team, felt noticeably underwhelming and smaller than usual. They lack any significant developments or substance, and while I understand the need to build up towards the main plotlines, they come across as bland,— almost as if they were made without much effort or passion. And honestly? The last 3 or 4 chapters could have been made into 1. That said, I’m still invested in the story and eager to see where it goes, but I felt it was important to share my thoughts on this.

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Targaryen_Official
Targaryen_Official
3 days ago
Replied to LongSongGolden

Don't worry about Otto. At all.

Targaryen_Official
Targaryen_Official
3 days ago
Replied to Z0d_

I see I see! Thanks for the explanation, now I know the difference!

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I still can't understand how people dislike seeing two beautifull women kissing eachother or something...

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

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Targaryen_Official
Targaryen_Official
3 days ago
Replied to MercenaryRollen

Dear Esteemed Critic, Thank you for your succinct and enlightening review of "House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'." Your eloquent critique, encapsulated in the word "Trash!👎", has provided me with profound insight into the depths of your analytical prowess. It's truly a marvel how one can convey such a wealth of feedback in a single syllable. In the spirit of your brevity, I shall strive to refine my narrative to meet the lofty standards set by your discerning taste. Perhaps in the future, I might even aspire to craft a tale as compelling and nuanced as your review. Warm regards, Targaryen_Official

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Targaryen_Official
3 days ago
Replied to MrNobody00

There's totally a grand possibility of a Game Of Thrones fanfic in the near future. I just really need a plot to work with...

Gwayne met my gaze, his expression tight but resolute. "I did what I had to..." he said quietly. "For the sake of my sister,— for Alicent's future." The silence that followed was deafening, broken only by the faint crackle of the candle.

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

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Targaryen_Official
Targaryen_Official
3 days ago
Replied to MrNobody00

It happened in the series, not sure if it happened in the books. Anyways, you are still right, so I will be more carefull in the future!

The heat was oppressive, the smoke choking, but I didn't move until the building was little more than ash. And this? This was just the beginning...

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

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Targaryen_Official
Targaryen_Official
3 days ago
Replied to MrNobody00

Not if I simply show the truth of what the hightowers and the citatel are planning to do to the other houses...

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Gwayne met my gaze, his expression tight but resolute. "I did what I had to..." he said quietly. "For the sake of my sister,— for Alicent's future." The silence that followed was deafening, broken only by the faint crackle of the candle.

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

Book&Literature · Targaryen_Official

Targaryen_Official
Targaryen_Official
3 days ago
Replied to MrNobody00

Yeah, I actually like this one a lot.

I almost turned to leave, but then came the sound of movement,— a shuffle, the soft creak of floorboards. The latch turned, and the door opened just enough to reveal her face, framed by unkempt waves of silver-gold hair.

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

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Targaryen_Official
Targaryen_Official
3 days ago
Replied to Dennis_Dindayal

It was only 2 different povs. Aenys and the last one being Otto's. When a different povs happens I do: . | Someones's pov: Something Something Something ---- When I simply do a litlle timeskip of a few hours, but still on the same Person Pov, I do: . A few minutes later: / The next day: Something Something Something.

Targaryen_Official
Targaryen_Official
3 days ago
Replied to MrNobody00

Thanks!

So... What's better, the 3rd Person Pov or the 1st Person Pov?

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

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    House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

    Book&Literature ACTION ROMANCE R18 MAGIC HAREM OVERPOWERED DRAGON GAME OF THRONES ASOIAF A SONG OF ICE AND FIRE

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    House Of The Dragon Fanfic (AU) . . . . . . | "The Exiled Dragon": Banished for forbidden love, Prince Aenys Targaryen, grandson of Jaehaerys, vanished into the ruins of Valyria amid a storm that overcame the ship that carried him to Essos. Forged by years of exile, he returns not as a broken man but as King Viserys’s chosen heir. With the savage dragon Cannibal at his command and ancient Valyrian relics in his grasp, Aenys is no longer the prince the realm remembers. Being summoned after Daemon Targaryen’s disgracefull proclamation of the 'Heir for a day', Aenys’s arrival shocks the court, sparking whispers of his mysterious power and unyielding ambition. The bonds of family are tested as old wounds reopen and a dangerous game begins. As dragons soar and rivalries intensify, Aenys must choose between loyalty to his brother and the allure of the Iron Throne. Will he unite House Targaryen or destroy it from within? An alternate universe saga where fire and blood reshape the destiny of Westeros. . . . . . . No rights to 'A Song Of Ice And Fire' and 'Fire and Blood' belong to me. I do this only as an hobby, nothing more.

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    One Piece: Admiral 'Eclipse'

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE R18 MAGIC HAREM SUPERPOWERS ANIME ANTIHERO SMUT

    A One Piece Fanfic . . . . . . In a sea of corruption and chaos, Vice-Admiral Kaelen D. Morvayne is a man of indulgence and defiance. With a cigar in hand and a disdain for cruelty, he carves his own path between justice and anarchy. And always guided by his enigmatic code, he battles Warlords, Yonko, and the powers that seek to dominate the seas. Kaelen’s charm and vices mask a relentless resolve, reshaping the tides of power with every move,— but to conquer the seas, he must first confront the void within. . . . . . . No rights to 'One Piece' belong to me. I do this only as an hobby, nothing more. (Chapters uploaded at my pace,— this is my escape, not a commitment. Enjoy the ride.)

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