Don't worry about Otto. At all.
I see I see! Thanks for the explanation, now I know the difference!
I still can't understand how people dislike seeing two beautifull women kissing eachother or something...
Book&Literature · Targaryen_Official
Dear Esteemed Critic, Thank you for your succinct and enlightening review of "House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'." Your eloquent critique, encapsulated in the word "Trash!👎", has provided me with profound insight into the depths of your analytical prowess. It's truly a marvel how one can convey such a wealth of feedback in a single syllable. In the spirit of your brevity, I shall strive to refine my narrative to meet the lofty standards set by your discerning taste. Perhaps in the future, I might even aspire to craft a tale as compelling and nuanced as your review. Warm regards, Targaryen_Official
There's totally a grand possibility of a Game Of Thrones fanfic in the near future. I just really need a plot to work with...
Gwayne met my gaze, his expression tight but resolute. "I did what I had to..." he said quietly. "For the sake of my sister,— for Alicent's future." The silence that followed was deafening, broken only by the faint crackle of the candle.
Book&Literature · Targaryen_Official
It happened in the series, not sure if it happened in the books. Anyways, you are still right, so I will be more carefull in the future!
The heat was oppressive, the smoke choking, but I didn't move until the building was little more than ash. And this? This was just the beginning...
Book&Literature · Targaryen_Official
Not if I simply show the truth of what the hightowers and the citatel are planning to do to the other houses...
Gwayne met my gaze, his expression tight but resolute. "I did what I had to..." he said quietly. "For the sake of my sister,— for Alicent's future." The silence that followed was deafening, broken only by the faint crackle of the candle.
Book&Literature · Targaryen_Official
Yeah, I actually like this one a lot.
I almost turned to leave, but then came the sound of movement,— a shuffle, the soft creak of floorboards. The latch turned, and the door opened just enough to reveal her face, framed by unkempt waves of silver-gold hair.
Book&Literature · Targaryen_Official
It was only 2 different povs. Aenys and the last one being Otto's. When a different povs happens I do: . | Someones's pov: Something Something Something ---- When I simply do a litlle timeskip of a few hours, but still on the same Person Pov, I do: . A few minutes later: / The next day: Something Something Something.
Thanks!
So... What's better, the 3rd Person Pov or the 1st Person Pov?
Book&Literature · Targaryen_Official
No one seems to be commenting on this, so I’ll say it: These last chapters, following Shiro's previous team’s match against the American team, felt noticeably underwhelming and smaller than usual. They lack any significant developments or substance, and while I understand the need to build up towards the main plotlines, they come across as bland,— almost as if they were made without much effort or passion. And honestly? The last 3 or 4 chapters could have been made into 1. That said, I’m still invested in the story and eager to see where it goes, but I felt it was important to share my thoughts on this.
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