Whenever i wake up in another universe everything is normal and adheres to typical cliches, this one is really weird though. Where are the big titty goth girlfriends though?
Would normally rate something so well written and interesting 4. But when every shitty fiction has a rating of four all i can do is give a five. Author if you read this, you should post this story on "spacebattles" and "questionable questing" forums if you want more than harem and xianxia zombies reading your splendid work.
The author has fucked up almost everything that has to do with numbers they are just decorations.
Elliot, on the other hand, won one bet after another and ended up racking in another 5000 magic coins. Now, he had 20000 magic coins.
Awakened: Evolving to Godhood
Fantasy · Crimson_ink
Why surprised when the fucking mission parameter allowed no more than 4 participants ?
The eyes of the beautiful receptionist, her coworkers, and several others in the mission hall opened wide in surprise with theirs jaws threatening to drop to touch the ground as they saw Thomas's head on the table. They found it hard to believe that a group of four teenagers managed to defeat and slay Thomas and seventy criminals who are known to be merciless when it comes to killing.
Awakened: Evolving to Godhood
Fantasy · Crimson_ink
70 ??? there were 3 or 4 bandits mentioned first, then inflated to 30. Now thry have 70 ???
Elliot and the others nodded, placing Thomas's head onto the table, signifying that they have killed the leader of the group. They also told the big-breasted beauty with a nice smile that they have killed seventy more people, all of who have gone rogue, serving Thomas, and were in the early to middle levels of the magical realm.
Awakened: Evolving to Godhood
Fantasy · Crimson_ink
It is getting borderline retarded.
"Did senior sister help you take them off, or did you take them off yourself?" His eldest senior sister's smile became even more intense.
Sign In Ten Years, Then I Am Exposed By My Gorgeous Senior
Eastern · Ji Muhan
1130 = ten thousand. Ok.
With a single thought, ten thousand beasts submitted!
Sign In Ten Years, Then I Am Exposed By My Gorgeous Senior
Eastern · Ji Muhan
It read quite good until chapter eight when total retardation infected the Islanders. I get that it was for driving the story forward, but when characters/mobs act like paper cut emotionless short term thinking chimpanzees i loose all interest in the story and world.
One Piece: With Sign-in System
Anime & Comics · ElvenKing20