Yumour

most important thing i expect from the novel is the world how it's built and how it interact with itself , i feel like kingdoms ,wars , fights, adventure, and mainly intriguing world is what make a novel good for me . also since this novel is about blood i want to feel the blood, so i think what you have done in chapter 0 is not good because it would be awesome to discover that inside the story . i have many characters in mind but who knows i might need them for my own novel. here is the character name; Desad ability ;simulation , he have high spatial intelligence and with his power he can simulate possible events in his head , his side effect is up to you if you like my character personality: obviously very intelligent and strategic person , calculating , also add what you want . body and race : up to you as well i am sorry i wrote too much . thank you if u took the time to read this comment