author is basically a noobie, its his first work for christs sake, there is a fine line between criticism and just being an asshole[img=proud][img=angry]
Authors good, really good 😊😉
And he realised— Why should they need to prove anything to the gods? Why must they fight for their acceptance? Why pray to gods, he wondered, when they can be one themselves.
The Mortal God of Olympus
Book&Literature · Robs511
Bruv, i wanna be honest with you, blunt even, the truth is that your writing feels robotic, it's missing this particular spark and I don't no how to explain it, but when someone writes without that spark, it makes the creation, novel, fanfic, or whatever you may call it feel rather boring and particularly tiring to read, then again this is just from my point of view and my personal opinion, no hard feelings, bruv.
i want to criticize you, but the truth is, it not your fault, and I'll pprobably do the same if someone stole my work.
Kinda lost motivation to continue after continuous theft.
Spider-Man 0X
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
The author said similar powers to quicksilver, not quicksilvers powers bro.
brotherly[img=nervous][img=proud]
After we did I went back to getting ready to make sure Sinister ended up fucked up the ass without any Vaseline.
I Am Doom (Marvel)
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
No offense bro, but is that the best you could do, cuz I think I remember a part where meliodas was older looking in anime when his father possessed him or something.
[Image reference for the suit] [> A/N: This is Meliodas' Full Grown Up Look as well. <]
DxD│A Devil with Three Essences
Anime & Comics · ChaosWriter
chicks with ddicks, now that is on another level of weird
This book has been deleted.
I'm lost what does he mean
This book has been deleted.
it gets better, character growth and all that
Reincarnated With Three Unique Skills
Fantasy · Elias_Nightwalker