I was too disconnected since it's been so long. I'm still holding on to the previous chaps so I might try to rewrite it sometime. For now, I just want to try and write this one though :)
Haha, was it too much of an info dump maybe? I'll look into it and try to be more concise with my writing. Thanks for the comment :)
Again, my memory isn't my strong suit, but If it isn't failing me I think it had something to do with the difference in time. The first time (when Subaru was one-shot) it was late at night and for some reason she was in a hurry (can't remember why though). The second time they "fought" it was way earlier during the evening or something, and she wasn't in a hurry? I'm gonna be totally honest, my memory is pretty bad. Like goldfish-memory bad... If my explanation ringed any bells then great if not then everything I said may be complete bs :) (lol)
'If it weren't for some being "cursing" me I would've actually died.' Shuddering at the realization, I tried to think of something else to take my mind off it.
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It sounds like an interesting concept, but that would mean I'd have to rewrite the whole story. I'll keep it in mind if I decide to rewrite. As it is now, I'd rather keep going with what I'm doing with minor tweaks than to start from scratch. I am but an inexperienced and newbie author, even if I decided to rewrite because I didn't like something at the beginning, I'd still make similar mistakes as a result of my inexperience.
I get what you're saying, but Mc still has the mindset of his previous world. He doesn't really know what he's doing, but I'm planning to temper his will a little and make him face reality. Then he'll have no choice but to train himself. Also as I keep saying, just because mc's stats are higher than Subaru, without knowing the situation he's walking into ofc he'll die pathetically. He's up against an assassin, and he has no CQC experience or anything of the sort. Only raw stats
I thought so too, but don't really remember.
I already had someone in mind, but I'll consider it and perhaps post a vote sometime in the future.
If my memories aren't failing me he was basically one-shot during their first encounter. Although I see your point, having higher base stats than Subaru doesn't really matter in this case. It was dark, he couldn't see anything. He has no training in CQC, or anything of the sort. He wasn't expecting an ambush either. Also, Elsa is an assassin and therefore she thrives in a dark environment. Lastly, Elsa is freakishly strong. She was moving fast enough that she was just a blur when fighting Reinhard. If you are still not happy with my reasoning I can't really do anything about it. In my opinion, the mc had no shot at survival in this situation.
'If it weren't for some being "cursing" me I would've actually died.' Shuddering at the realization, I tried to think of something else to take my mind off it.
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'Cute' "Cute" I could see her ears reddening. Oh, I did it again.
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original AOT - A Tempered Will
As Patrick finally graduates from hell, he is instantly thrown into another. Can he survive, or is he just another snack for the Titans to feed on? Features a mc with a remixed "Return by death" in attack on titan world. MC is born in AOT earth, and doesn't have any past life memories, so no plot knowledge. I own nothing except my MC and eventual OC's. All rights belong to their respective owners Cover pic, not mine. DM if you want it removed1 Chs 10 Collections
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Pathstrider in Teyvat (Genshin fic)
Waking up on a mysterious purple-themed Island, Ethan doesn't understand a thing. Where is he? What was he doing prior to this? How come the only memories he remembers are of three video-games he used to play? What is he supposed to do? "Should I just go back to sleep?" - Ethan Read on if you feel like it. Mostly writing this for my own satisfaction. Any support, tips or suggestions are welcome and will motivate me to write more~ Disclaimer, I don't own any of the characters, setting, or worlds, except my MC. All the rights belong to Mihoyo3 Chs 34 Collections
Mc is just gaining his bearings, and is currently located in Inazuma... But who knows what'll happen in the future🤔
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