Krlnkir

1yr

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Tell me you don't understand the basics of relativity without telling me you don't understand the basics of relativity. (I realise it's just a fantasy story, so this isn't actual criticism. But the line made me laugh out loud at how ridiculous it was.)

Blake's fist had moved so fast that it had actually reached the speed of light. This punch alone caused the whole ground to quake. As well as send out a powerful blast of astral energy in all directions.

RE: My Dragon Girlfriend In The Dragonic Apocalypse

Fantasy · invayne

Krlnkir

1yr

Posted

There are a lot of bad stories here. There are a few decent ones. And then there are a handful of stories like this one, which make this platform worth visiting. Excellent characters, whose motives make sense, yet do not all align. A suitable balance of OP MC and struggles to overcome. The r18 bits are mostly actually relevant to the plot, whilst being enjoyable in their special way. A fun read. Maybe not to everyone's taste, but for those who enjoy this sort of thing, it is close to the pinnacle.

Playboy Cultivator in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Margrave

Krlnkir

1yr

Commented

Probably meant "naivety", not "nativity". Unless his face is a diorama celebrating the birth of Jesus, which to be fair would also throw opponents off-guard.

At some point, Jacob Remock Hays flipped his people-pleaser habits into a mask of nativity and played her and Roxy Alexander Grace for fools.

Playboy Cultivator in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Margrave

Krlnkir

1yr

Posted

First few chapters are okay. Writing is a bit muddled, switching between 1st 2nd and 3rd person. In later chapters, writing gets worse, and the author literally copy-pastes entire paragraphs to pad space. Do not read this story.

Becoming the King of A New Filthy World

Fantasy · Alex_morg

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