Webnovel Author: AzureFluteFan2 - Fanfic Collection

Not gonna lie, going to Vik probably wasn’t the best of ideas. He had no real excuse to give to have known about him. He’ll definitely be a lot more trustworthy than most rippers out there, but he’ll probably just get denied service for being so fishy about how he knows.

Lucy would make a decent mentor for cyberspace and hacking stuff. Songbird too for that matter. I don’t know about anyone else though. Rebecca mainly just shoots stuff until it dies and I don’t know what any of the other guys could teach him other than good tips on merc work.

There is no gun that fits “stealth” really, but handguns are usually the go to

I think it’s weird that a stat and resource value are named the same thing. Might’ve been cooler to name Sin for demonic energy, and Virtue for angelic energy.

Nah, you’re good. In all honesty I had no clue what AR was until a while back, and when I first heard of it I thought it was just a better Ciel.

Akashic Record is meant to be even more than an Ultimate Skill. It’s THE origin skill. It’s not just some Lord of Wisdom Raphael wannabe. This one would either be a fake, or a heavily restrained version of it.

Wasn’t AR a skill on the same level as Milim’s Magicule Reactor? I think it’s a lot more than a unique skill at that point.

Where is the Medusa lady’s supposed brother? These are all just women.

I really hope you don’t intend to turn this into a poly relationship, or a harem. The dynamic between new-Momonga and the MC is fine. If this turns into a harem, I feel like it would be taking advantage of new-momonga’s more outwardly timid nature.

Ain’t no way you turned Maliketh the black blade into was essentially elden lord only for him to get ganked by a bunch of omen. Poor doggy, dude didn’t even get the chance to use destined death.

True, I think Praetorahnid sounds a lot better. Then again when I was a kid I named by Gardevoir Anakin, so I don’t know if I have a good naming sense or what.