Legacy_Spellsword

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Legacy_Spellsword
Legacy_Spellsword
2 months ago
Posted

honestly tjis could a very great story but it falls terribly due to so many factors, first is the unneccedary censorship that pretty much takes out huge chunks of the story, next is the broken grammar that takes the immersion out. third is how some of the lines repeat themselves over and over again. it makes it seem so low quality that it makes all the other aspects of the story seem nonexistent.

Legacy_Spellsword
Legacy_Spellsword
2 months ago
Commented

seriously? why are things censored? its annoying and ruins stories. if your gonna make a dark story like this dont censor.

"Hey everyone, look at this f*cker here." He gathered the attention of everyone to what he was saying.

No More Pain For This Villain.

No More Pain For This Villain.

Fantasy · Satan03

Legacy_Spellsword
Legacy_Spellsword
2 months ago
Commented

honestly censorship like this ruins the flow and is absolutely unneccesary

Legacy_Spellsword
Legacy_Spellsword
3 months ago
Commented

honestly im surprised Athena isnt reacting to him having a reference of Gaia in one of his skills

Gaia's Embrace: When inside of rocky terrain the user's mind and physical stamina is actively but slowly restored faster than normal.

Danmachi: Rise of The Rampart

Danmachi: Rise of The Rampart

Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever

Legacy_Spellsword
Legacy_Spellsword
3 months ago
Commented

im surprised Freya/Syr hasnt seen Avalon residing within his soul yet. has it been removed from him?

Syr paused and looked at the green uniform, hanging peacefully under the moonlight. Her mind wandered to the stark contrast between Bell and Shirou. Bell had a bright, transparent soul, like an unpolished gem, full of light and potential. Shirou's soul, on the other hand, was tarnished, covered with layers of scars hiding his true potential. If one only saw Shirou's soul, he would seem broken—but his actions, his deeds, always shone with a rare beauty. The irony only made him more intriguing.

Fate x Danmachi: The Sword Prince (eng)

Fate x Danmachi: The Sword Prince (eng)

Anime & Comics · Rayish_

Legacy_Spellsword
Legacy_Spellsword
7 months ago
Replied to Spejs

or outcome 3 is that the game system has no games like the ps3

Back at Rumi's apartment, Hiroto was slightly depressed since he found out he didn't have enough money to purchase a game console but consoled himself knowing that after saving up some more he should be able to.

Reborn as Saitama in MHA

Reborn as Saitama in MHA

Anime & Comics · Suploly

Legacy_Spellsword
Legacy_Spellsword
8 months ago
Commented

this seems to always happen with actual good unique stories, always dropped and never picked up again. So many stories that have great unique ideas that nobody else has really picked up on are left to rot and i really hate that.

Legacy_Spellsword
Legacy_Spellsword
9 months ago
Commented

this is one thing i hate about most webnovels, lack of proper grammar. it ruins the pace of the story and makes high tension scenes lose all traction and just makes it seem low effort

'Is it just me or they have became slower?'

Danmachi: The Crimson Flash

Danmachi: The Crimson Flash

Anime & Comics · Plagiarist_Astre

Legacy_Spellsword
Legacy_Spellsword
9 months ago
Commented

Rock and Stone brother!

But later on, he was adopted by an old Dwarf, a blacksmith in the village.

Danmachi: The Blind Swordsman

Danmachi: The Blind Swordsman

Anime & Comics · 6_SHINIGAMI_9

Legacy_Spellsword
Legacy_Spellsword
9 months ago
Commented

huh, saved by a certified rock and stone dwarf, i consider that pretty lucky depending on how lush the beard is

"Oh, you can tell, what gave it away?" he says curiously. I answered, "Probably the badass beard. Sorry for the smartass comment. I couldn't help myself. Also, I generally want to know if that's racist or not for dwarfs. The second would be the bulging muscles since dwarfs develop more muscularly, I think, and probably your stature, and I'm not making a height joke; I'm just curious."

Oh No, I get stuck with Crazy Name that Stuck me with A crazy Goddess!

Oh No, I get stuck with Crazy Name that Stuck me with A crazy Goddess!

Anime & Comics · RikuKage