Big_Fan_Of_Daoism

Big_Fan_Of_Daoism

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Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
1 months ago
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Although I give it a 5 star I would say closer to 4,5. This is after reading 200 chapters Plot: the plot is really good, its interesting and very entertaining while also keeping you hooked. I would probably only have 1 problem which is that he pretty much ignores his disciple:). Characters: this is probably the worst ranking out of all my criteria. The characters don’t feel very bland and we are starting to see backgrounds formed for several side characters. Which is definitly a plus but after 200 chaps there are already a lot of characters and most of them still feel quite underdeveloped but I hope that changes when I read more chapters. Then there has been little chracter development which is alright because that doesn’t need to be forced but I like that the mc has become moee confident. One problem I have with the mc though is that for a normal modern person he never had a problem with killing. Like even a city full of normal people. World: I find the world very interesting. And it seems the author wants it to have a multitude of different power systems in one world which if succesfull could be very good. Besides that we also slowly get to know each region more in a way that feels nice. But there are a few problems. One is that everything feels very disconected. Even 2 cities one the same continent don’t feel as if they are in the same region. Part of this is because although I find the worldbuilding interesting, much of society feels left alone. We know there is a king and a crown prince in Eastern Continent bur if there only 1 kingdom, how do the king(s) and the Great Demon Sect coexist are all things never touched upon making the Eastern Continent feel very empty and thus disconnected. All in all great novel, very entertaining and would definetly reccommend.

Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
11 months ago
Commented

Babies should really be babes. Else it seems really messed up

"How long will it take? I am already excited to see the babies on the installation screen. I wonder what new scenes and animations they will have. Will they have new story lines? Will they have new girls?", he wondered while he stared at his monitor and waited for the installation to be completed. But the update was big, and the installation was taking longer than usual.

Absolute Mind Control:I Tame Milfs And Yanderes With Telepathy System

Absolute Mind Control:I Tame Milfs And Yanderes With Telepathy System

Fantasy · different_minds

Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
1 years ago
Commented

Yeah, you dont want that

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Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
1 years ago
Commented

Or maybe im a idiot who is getting something wrong

Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
1 years ago
Commented

Wait, if we knows he is gonna die, that makes the stakes lower when reading this and in my eyes less fun. I hooe that could change.

Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
1 years ago
Commented

I would put some in luck. Luck is always usefull

Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
1 years ago
Commented

She is. 100%

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Eating Beauties to Level Up

Eating Beauties to Level Up

Fantasy · Titing21

Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
1 years ago
Commented

Is 10 it already doubled or not?

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Eating Beauties to Level Up

Eating Beauties to Level Up

Fantasy · Titing21

Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
Big_Fan_Of_Daoism
1 years ago
Commented

Does this contain the mc becoming a cuck?

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