Although I give it a 5 star I would say closer to 4,5. This is after reading 200 chapters Plot: the plot is really good, its interesting and very entertaining while also keeping you hooked. I would probably only have 1 problem which is that he pretty much ignores his disciple:). Characters: this is probably the worst ranking out of all my criteria. The characters don’t feel very bland and we are starting to see backgrounds formed for several side characters. Which is definitly a plus but after 200 chaps there are already a lot of characters and most of them still feel quite underdeveloped but I hope that changes when I read more chapters. Then there has been little chracter development which is alright because that doesn’t need to be forced but I like that the mc has become moee confident. One problem I have with the mc though is that for a normal modern person he never had a problem with killing. Like even a city full of normal people. World: I find the world very interesting. And it seems the author wants it to have a multitude of different power systems in one world which if succesfull could be very good. Besides that we also slowly get to know each region more in a way that feels nice. But there are a few problems. One is that everything feels very disconected. Even 2 cities one the same continent don’t feel as if they are in the same region. Part of this is because although I find the worldbuilding interesting, much of society feels left alone. We know there is a king and a crown prince in Eastern Continent bur if there only 1 kingdom, how do the king(s) and the Great Demon Sect coexist are all things never touched upon making the Eastern Continent feel very empty and thus disconnected. All in all great novel, very entertaining and would definetly reccommend.
Babies should really be babes. Else it seems really messed up
"How long will it take? I am already excited to see the babies on the installation screen. I wonder what new scenes and animations they will have. Will they have new story lines? Will they have new girls?", he wondered while he stared at his monitor and waited for the installation to be completed. But the update was big, and the installation was taking longer than usual.
Fantasy · different_minds
Yeah, you dont want that
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Or maybe im a idiot who is getting something wrong
Wait, if we knows he is gonna die, that makes the stakes lower when reading this and in my eyes less fun. I hooe that could change.
I would put some in luck. Luck is always usefull
She is. 100%
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Fantasy · Titing21
Is 10 it already doubled or not?
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Fantasy · Titing21
Does this contain the mc becoming a cuck?
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I really don’t like him
My Beautiful Disciples, I'm really not the Main Character!
Fantasy · Revonne