Sushishy

This is story is so good I can't stop reading it. The only downside is that there is no mention of who's POV it is, but flaws aside, I still enjoy the heck out of it. Keep it up! [img=update]

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Before I dive into my review, I'd like to express my surprise at how this novel managed to captivate my interest, despite not usually being drawn to R-18 series. There are genuinely intriguing aspects that make this story stand out.First and foremost, I must commend the novel for its strong foundations. Even within just 14 chapters, it's evident that there's an abundance of potential for future developments. This series has the ability to unfold into something truly remarkable.One delightful aspect that stood out to me was the underlying sweetness woven throughout the story. It brought a smile to my face as I read, adding a touch of warmth and charm. Although some of this sweetness was connected to the H-scenes, it remained endearing and enjoyable.Lastly, I'd like to touch upon the fascinating dynamics between the protagonist and the deuteragonist. Their interactions and the subtle nuances of their connection were particularly intriguing. There was an undeniable allure in witnessing their relationship unfold, keeping me engrossed in their journey.I wish the author the best of luck with this captivating tale. May their storytelling continue to captivate readers and unfold with even greater depth and excitement in the future.

Hey there, lovely people! I'm feeling a bit shameless right now, but I just had to give a five-star review for my story! Sorry, not sorry, I just had to share how much I love it! Anyway, let me reintroduce my fantastical tale to you all. wipes sweat from forehead I've been practicing this introduction in my head, so bear with me! *** Well, hey there! I guess it's time for me to introduce my story, huh? But how should I do it? Hmm... Alright, so this story takes place in a fantastical setting - pretty cool, right? Although, let me tell you, it's not exactly the kind of place you'd want to be transported to willingly. You know how some stories have the main character wishing to go to a different world or accidentally stumbling into one? Well, this ain't one of those ideal scenarios. It's more like a nightmare filled with danger and malice, but that's what makes it exciting, right? Okay, I may have repeated myself a bit there. Sorry about that! The first version was a bit too wordy, but I hope this version is more concise and enjoyable. If you're curious about where the story's headed, check out the first one with a '0' in the title. But be warned, things might play out differently this time around. If you've got any questions or comments, feel free to drop them below. I'm all ears! That's about it from me. I hope you'll all stick around until the end and have a fantastic day! *** (my inner self: Aaaand cut!) Oh, that's all there is to it? (My inner self, grinning: That's all we wrote, friend!) Well then, thank you so much for your assistance! I truly appreciate it. (My inner self, giving a thumbs up and a big grin: No problem at all, my friend. Happy to help!) ...Wait a minute, the introductions aren't finished yet! Stop the presses, we don't want to reveal anything too soon! (My inner self, laughing: Uh oh, we almost let the cat out of the bag there! Thanks for catching that!) Well, folks, that's a wrap on the introduction! See you all soon! (My inner self, waving goodbye: Farewell, everyone! Until next time!)

I gotta say, it's my first time rating a book, but this one definitely hit all the right spots for me. The author really knows how to build up the story and the characters, and I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. And let me tell you, the conversations between the characters felt so natural, like I was really there in the room with them! And don't even get me started on the steamy scenes...whew, talk about spicy! I'm still fanning myself over here! All in all, I gotta give it to the author, she really knocked it out of the park with this one. Great job, author! Keep 'em coming!

Hey guys! I've had a change of heart and have decided to rewrite all of my work. I know it's been a month and a half since I started uploading, and I'm really sorry to put you through this. But please, be kind to me! When I revisited my work, I realized that my character's conversations were short, but their inner thoughts were long-winded. No wonder I couldn't seem to make progress with the story! So, I had to make the tough call to start fresh. I could have edited it all, but it would have been more work than just rewriting it. I hope you can understand where I'm coming from. I'm looking forward to seeing you all again, and hopefully, it won't be too long before I'm back with some fresh and improved content!

Thank you for taking the time to read my story. Despite facing difficulties in my engineering course, I am determined to continue writing and developing this story. I am grateful for your encouragement and support, and it motivates me to keep going. Rest assured that I will strive to maintain the same level of quality and progress in the upcoming chapters. I am excited to share more of the story and its characters with you, and I hope that you will enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it. Thank you again for your kind words, and I look forward to sharing more of my work with you in the future.

Hi, my name is Sushishy, and I apologize for the delayed introduction. I would like to share my story with you all and hope that you enjoy it. First and foremost, I would like to specify the central theme of this story. This particular story is an intriguing blend of two distinct elements - the gritty realism of the real world, and the wondrous fantasy of a fictional realm. Set in a world that is both familiar and alien, this dark fantasy series explores the intricacies of a universe that is both magical and dangerous. At its core, this tale is a reflection of our own world, albeit one that is twisted and corrupted by the presence of magic and otherworldly beings. In this universe, we see the same struggles that we see in our own lives - the quest for power, the search for identity, and the battle against our own inner demons. However, these challenges are magnified in this fantastical realm, where the stakes are higher, and the consequences are more severe. At the same time, the story also immerses us in a world that is filled with wonder and enchantment. From majestic dragons soaring through the skies to wizards casting spells that defy the laws of physics, this universe is a place where anything is possible. Every corner of this realm is imbued with a sense of magic, and there is always a sense of adventure lurking just beyond the horizon. The combination of these two elements creates a unique narrative that is both captivating and immersive. It is a story that combines the raw realism of our own world with the imaginative wonder of a fictional realm, creating a tapestry of darkness and light, of hope and despair, and of triumph and tragedy. As we follow the protagonist, Leon Asura, on his journey to discover his place in this world, we are drawn into a tale that is at once thrilling and heartbreaking. We watch as he struggles to overcome his own limitations and rise to the challenge of the cataclysmic events that threaten to consume his world. And through his eyes, we gain a deeper understanding of the intricate web of magic and intrigue that lies at the heart of this universe. In short, this story is a unique and enthralling fusion of two seemingly disparate elements - the harsh reality of our own world and the fantastic wonder of a fictional realm. It is a tale that will capture your imagination and leave you eagerly anticipating the next chapter. I created this story purely for my own satisfaction, without any intention of sharing it with others initially. However, I would be grateful if someone did take the time to read it. Although I had created the story a year ago, I ended up deleting it because I lacked the necessary skills to write a compelling tale at that time. I eventually published the first chapter on webnovel, but my academic commitments forced me to discontinue the series. The uniqueness of this story lies in its departure from the isekai genre, which typically features protagonists being transported to a fantasy world. It is not a power-fantasy series, as one might assume. Instead, it delves into the horror and realism of a world that defies logic and reason, where even the most fantastical elements are tinged with darkness. The story is a reminder that a fantasy world can be just as brutal and unforgiving as our own. It takes the reader on a journey that strips away the veneer of magic and enchantment, exposing the harsh realities that lie beneath. This is a world where nothing is guaranteed, and even the most powerful beings can be struck down by a single blow. It is a world that demands respect, not just from its inhabitants but from its readers as well. I would appreciate it if you could read my story, and I would be grateful fo any constructive criticism you can provide. That's all I wanted to share with you all. Ciao!