Wizened

Your grammer is so top notch I like the way you actually critique the novel instead of saying “ boo it’s bad” Random question but do you have any story recommendations fanfic or otherwise?

This is a wonderfully written piece of work and has excellent grammer and potential I like the authors writing personally. The reason this ain’t higher for me is because it seems like nothing is happening yk like everything is a skippable training arc kinda, another thing from me is that the mc is just so happy go lucky all the time it’s like dial it back just a bit he is a ninja after all. The system is 50/50 for me but I don’t mind it too much, lady tsunade isn’t a bad pairing this fanfic has made her seem a little bland sometimes. Overall it’s a great read and I see it being very well executed

I feel like it not only tells yu the tone of the story and where the author might do in the future but also the personality of the mc, but at the same time it’s somewhat of an objective opinion rather then fact, I do respect your point tho

Great story so far I love the fact that I can actually understand the concept behind the character and the grammar is top notch I would love if the update stability/scheduhe was worked out but hey this is a lovely story already so I’m just excited to see where it goes…

Are there any stories yu actually like?