KObracali_the_2nd

KObracali_the_2nd

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KObracali_the_2nd
KObracali_the_2nd
2 months ago
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Has potential to become a really good OP mc novel (gives me solo leveling vibes but stronger)

KObracali_the_2nd
KObracali_the_2nd
2 months ago
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I like how the beggining of the story is really fleshed out and the way the author describes details it flows really nicely. From before reincarnation to getting reincarnated to awakening memories and starting the adventure. Typically these things are done in a rush or skipped completely, so It was a very nice distinction from other novels. Writing quality is one of the best I have seen. The character design and character introduction was really good for MC and Cheon ancestor The progression really set the tone for the max and cheon ancestor. My only problem is that all the characters have a complete 180 from their original personality to complete reverence for the MC when they know his identity. It highlights the MC in a good way however I feel as if it highlights too much about the MC and undermines other characters. The world background is done pretty well. I like how he bridged murim and cultivation. I just get a bit confused about power levels on the lower end because they weren’t translated from cultivation to murim. The only thing that was translated was core formation = heavenly demon. His talent and skill is perfectly explained by his overwhelming past power. We were able to understand him enough yet still not know enough about him that I want to learn more. I feel however that there is too many coincidences because first finding cheon ancestor out of nowhere has a low chance of happening and directly after that finding kids that have a connection to old world. It’s just too much of a coincidence.

KObracali_the_2nd
KObracali_the_2nd
2 months ago
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KObracali_the_2nd
KObracali_the_2nd
2 months ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

KObracali_the_2nd
KObracali_the_2nd
2 months ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

KObracali_the_2nd
KObracali_the_2nd
2 months ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

KObracali_the_2nd
KObracali_the_2nd
4 months ago
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Shouldn’t rank at least count for something

KObracali_the_2nd
KObracali_the_2nd
1 years ago
Posted

The ending of the synopsis made it unique and funny. I haven’ seen one like that yet

KObracali_the_2nd
KObracali_the_2nd
1 years ago
Commented

Favorite line in the book

" You merely adopted the dark….. I was born in it " 

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KObracali_the_2nd
KObracali_the_2nd
2 years ago
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Is it same universe as other book