Aizen is not known for being strong, he is known for being Aizen. Is all I can say without giving spoilers
Where do I start? First off, kudos to the author! He did an amazing job keeping the story interesting and fresh. Normally, when you hear "Marvel or DC fanfic," you think of the Marvel Universe or the DC Universe—No. The author took a whole different approach, and not to spoil it for potential readers, I'll simply say I quite like it. Now to the review: Writing Quality: This one is entirely on me, so I do have a bit of bias in saying the quality is great. However, I can't deny there are many issues, especially in the beginning chapters when I was still undecided on whether to remove all the Chinese elements. They're mostly gone now, but all that's left is for me to contemplate which idioms to keep and which to scrap. So, 4 stars. Uploading Stability: Readers who joined during September 15-21 will probably think this deserves 0 stars, lol. But for everyone else who has been around long enough, I'm sure they won't fault me for giving myself a 5-star rating. Story Development: 5 stars. Hell yeah! This is the reason the story is so fun to translate. There are so many twists and turns that always manage to excite me. The plot is amazing, and I have zero complaints. Good job, author! Character Design: Oooh, this is a tricky one. You see, the main character is Charlie, and he's... well, a typical, standard character. Nothing unique. No particular emotional turmoil. No... nothing. I feel like if he were replaced with any random passerby, the story wouldn't change much. This is where I think the author missed the mark. However, on the other hand, I feel like this might have been done deliberately. The story seems to focus more on the characters Charlie controls rather than Charlie himself. Unfortunately, the characters are pre-designed—they have a whole cinematic universe just for them, so there's not much originality there. The only saving grace is the side characters. They have their own stories, their own feelings, and the way the author portrays them honestly works wonders. I low-key cried at the end of Ivan's tale. Still, I have to give this 2 stars. World Background: Ehh... by Chapter 100, we've only seen one city and a few key locations, so there's not much in terms of world-building. In fact, it's kind of bland. 1 star. If you ask me to picture the world, all I can say is "Riverton." Now, this is actually fine—there are many interesting works of fiction that take place in just one city. These aren't web novels but actual books I've read, like A List of Cages by Robin Roe, After the Shot Drops by Randy Ribay, and My Sister Rosa by Justine Larbalestier. However, the issue here is that those books have vivid descriptions, not just of the characters but also of the buildings, the streets, the cracks in the pavement, the smell of smog in the air, and the distant sirens. Unfortunately, this story lacks that level of detail, so 1 star. --- Sooooo, I did the math and... damn, 3.4. That's kinda low. I didn't expect that, especially since I really like this fic. Welp... boo-hoo. - Sword out
Nope ur correct, I use ai to fix grammer and clarify, then I go back to fix any inconsistency. Then I run it to grammerly to add better umm… 🤔 grammer. I also use this time to change the names and remove many descriptions that seems out of character if you know what I mean, then I run it through speechify so I can speed read the chap. Lastly I send it to my proofreader to see if he can spot anything wrong 😔 and oh boy… U wouldn’t believe how many mistakes there are. Then I fix those mistakes, confirm there are no more errors and post it… sigh I wish google came up with alpha go 4.0 so I can do it all in one copy and paste lol
Too late, I’ve changed most of the names, I’m at the point where if I see a Chinese name the first thing that comes to my mind is “nah… that shit gotta go.” There’s like less than 5 Chinese names in the whole novel so far. I’m at 150 chapters 1/3 done. lol 😝 It’s tedious I agree with you, not to mention remembering it all, that’s why I have the Aux chapter. Anyway It’s whatever. keeps me busy I guess.
Although I'm trying to keep the ratio balanced, I can't deny that this is a Chinese Novel, Should I Keep more Chinese names or say "F*ck it?"
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[TL Note- to all my female readers, I'm simply an editor; I love you all and completely disagree with everything written thus far...]
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hmm... ok Your logic is flawed. The notion that Party A—the femboy—is confirmed to be male, and that Party B (myself), who does not like men, chooses not to interact with Party A romantically, is not gay simply because of the false claim that femboys are "more female than actual females." Regardless of the era, this is a contradiction. What defines a female—personality, physical characteristics, or self-identification (e.g., pronouns)? The answer is clear: biological characteristics. If Party A undergoes all the necessary medical procedures and, upon examination, is found to be identical to any common woman, then yes, Party A is without a doubt a female. Science does not lie. (Whether others agree or not is a psychological and philosophical question, not a scientific one.) Returning to the subject, you claim I am gay because Party A has the personality of a female from a previous era, and I do not find that attractive. "That" refers not only to subjective traits, which can be measured by assessments such as the CliftonStrengths assessment (though it may not be the most valid tool), but also to something I am neither aware of nor interested in becoming aware of, due to my judgment that "she" is, in fact, male. In conclusion, your argument is rejected and will not be "liked" due to the inadequate reasoning behind it.
[TL Note- apparently, if a man is hot enough, other men can fall for him .ie, (yin and yang BS) I call cap]
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wait no... I feel like u talking to R00T lol, ima stay out of this
What do you mean SWB upload daily
Your logic is not valid, Through the notion that Party A-The femboy is confirmed to be an man And party B-Myself not liking men, decides to not interact with party A with any romantic gestures is gay due to the False claim that Femboys are more female than actual females, regardless of the era, this is a contradiction. What defines female, personality, physical characteristics, or self-identification (ie. Pronouns) The answer is quite obvious biological characteristics, If party A went through all the medical procedures and through examination she is found to be identical to any common woman then yes Party A is without a doubt a female. Science does not lie. (As to whether others will agree, that’s not a science question but a psychological and philosophical question) Back to the subject, U clam I am gay because Party A has the personality of a female from the old era, and I find “that” not attractive (“that” refers to not only a subjective trait that albeit can be measured through assessments such as “Cliftonstrengths assessment” (not the most valid one, but the only one I can think of at the moment) but, “that” also refers to something I am not aware of and will not ever be interested in becoming aware of due to the biases of my judgment that “she” is actually a male) Dear sword, I regret to inform you, your statement has been declined and will not be “liked” due to inadequate thoughts behind your comment. 😝
[TL Note- apparently, if a man is hot enough, other men can fall for him .ie, (yin and yang BS) I call cap]
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It reminded him of those late nights spent reading novels, where the thrill of the story kept him glued to the screen, unable to stop despite the growing fatigue. He'd tell himself, "Just one more chapter," only to find himself clicking through page after page until the first light of dawn crept through his window. The cliffhangers were relentless, each chapter ending just as the tension peaked, compelling him to continue.
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