rahman_m04

The writing becomes strange from chapter 11 onward and feels very uncomfortable to read, like an unedited MTL (machine translation).

I get goosebumps every time I read this. Actually, the concept of the Flugel is good, but aren't all Flugel supposed to be female??? And the conversation gives me chills.

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"It's a good story, but I don't really like it when the main character is paired with Venelana Gremory because there are many characters from the two anime. Why Venelana Gremory, who is already married? Honestly, the story would be much better if the main character's parents were made to die at the beginning so that there could be an adoptive mother relationship with Venelana Gremory in the early part."

After thinking it over, I really hate this arc. This arc is complete trash. The MC already knows the enemy's plan but still loses, and don't give me the excuse that he's too arrogant—it's been used way too often by other writers.