Mr_IMMOR_TAL

Mr_IMMOR_TAL

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Mr_IMMOR_TAL
Mr_IMMOR_TAL
1 days ago
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responding to the other guy, brother if you can't enjoy then don't try to criticise without any merit, author u r doing wonderful, this character development and new world building is crazy awesome.

No one was waiting for me to prove myself. No one was planning to turn on me. No one was looking at me like I was a liability or a threat.

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Transmigration: Into the Life of Severus Snape

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Mr_IMMOR_TAL
Mr_IMMOR_TAL
5 days ago
Replied to grimmhorizon

lol you are right, And that gif is goofy af, Matter of fact imma let Kagami dance like that

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Our bodies collided as we danced to the rhythm of the songs.

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Naruto- White Fang Template

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Mr_IMMOR_TAL
Mr_IMMOR_TAL
5 days ago
Replied to grimmhorizon

back of her head my guy

Our bodies collided as we danced to the rhythm of the songs.

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Naruto- White Fang Template

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Mr_IMMOR_TAL
Mr_IMMOR_TAL
7 days ago
Replied to 7Penguin_pOpsickle

lol

He jabbed his sword in the ground and looked me in the eyes. "I like you, and by the way, Hizuna wasn't my disciple; he was just one of the people who I taught a bit about my style."

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Mr_IMMOR_TAL
Mr_IMMOR_TAL
7 days ago
Replied to Xenox_6302

will better that

Misachi was the one who spoke, "We had a master samurai attacking us...there was nothing we could have done." She looked away from me. "So I told Shisui to run."

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Mr_IMMOR_TAL
Mr_IMMOR_TAL
7 days ago
Replied to SlippingForesT

yeah, Sorry for that, first time writing a romance angle, either way, she is not that involved in the story yk in the future chaps, so dw

Mr_IMMOR_TAL
Mr_IMMOR_TAL
8 days ago
Replied to SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

That....Actually makes sense..Yk I Have been treating this novel more like an actual novel then a fanfic. So when I was writing the arc, it didn't feel like filler to me...But considering from a Fanfic's Pov, It sure looks like a filler damnn... Thanks for the comment anyways, War arc will come soon enough so dw, Back to the grind.

Mr_IMMOR_TAL
Mr_IMMOR_TAL
8 days ago
Replied to shadow_blaz0198

I mean, I don't plan on dropping it ofc, I have already written 69 chapters as of yet, So yeah. I do get what ure trying to say, Thanks for the reply man.

Mr_IMMOR_TAL
Mr_IMMOR_TAL
8 days ago
Replied to Hasan_savkiev

Thanks so much man,

Mr_IMMOR_TAL
Mr_IMMOR_TAL
8 days ago
Replied to Kanemo

I mean I get what you saying..A fanfic should have more interactions with the actual characters of the show... If you have read the Outsider's Resolve, I was tryna create OC's like he does. It didn't work out as planned though, Plus I get people don't like pairing with Oc's, Another thing I could have done better. Thanks for reply man,

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