I also wish I could write more. but as I work the whole week I only have time on the weekend, even so from time to time I make an effort to be able to do a little more, thanks for the support.
Sure each Rinnegan has specific abilities, but even so they come with the basic abilities shown by Nagato, being the six paths, attraction and repulsion, and Chibaku Tensei which was created by Hagoromo, the special ability of Hajime's Rinnegan is his personal dimension, where he has control of everything in it, and also being able to teleport to where he already knows or random places.
He will make her see things from a not-so distorted perspective.
Hamura and Man, thanks for the support.
First I would like to thank you for reading until now, about the characters being like this we must remember that this is a fanfic, so we have to take it into consideration, and about Gamamaru being like this, I'm just trying to show a side that has not been spoken, because the story only tells flowery and heroic things, so everything has its dark side, I hope you understand, and thanks for following up here.
Got it, I'm planning to edit the earlier chapters a bit more, and also check the recent ones, thanks for the feedback.
For those who are reading this Fanfic, I would like to know how the writing is compared to the beginning. And also if I am managing to have any evolution as a writer. Constructive comments are always welcome.
Thanks for the comment, but I don't think this has anything to do with the story I am writing.
Leaving the laboratory, he enters the entrance hall of the castle, where seven women are waiting, these women were the ones who had the best genes in this world, the best human beings, because, after a lot of research, they will carry his progeny.
Otsutsuki: The Path to Supremacy
Anime & Comics · KingDovahkiin
Eu pretendo mais para frente explicar mais sobre isso, porque agora nao ira afetar o enredo.
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original HP: A Legend Begins
Alexander a person with the memory of another, who lived a life of 30 years, where dreams were being ruined by the reality of modern age society, and after a twist of fate ended up in a body of a child about to enter Hogwarts, promised that in this life would explore this new era, and take every opportunity he had to go where no gold and money can reach, and since then begins a legend that will have his name spread all over the places and who knows different dimensions, like a certain Merlin. (People I would like to inform you that this is my first time writing, so please keep that in mind, also I don't speak English, so I will be using a translator for this, I would like to let that most of the characters mentioned in this fanfic are J.K.Rowling's creation!) https://www.patreon.com/KingDovahkiin this my Patreon. https://discord.gg/n6WzWjdsC322 Chs 770 Collections
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Otsutsuki: The Path to Supremacy
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After a failed experiment, Hajime finds himself in a world he thought was fictitious, using his future knowledge to his advantage, and also being born directly from a goddess. Will he shake the foundation or will he fall like many others who have tried in the past? (This is Naruto's world, but since it is far away, then there will be very little interaction at first, so be warned.) https://www.patreon.com/KingDovahkiin this my Patreo n. https://discord.gg/n6WzWjdsC322 Chs 1.3k Collections
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HP: A Legend Begins PT-BR
Alexandre uma pessoa com a memória de outra, aonde viveu uma vida até seus 30 anos, onde os sonhos estavam a ser arruinados pela realidade da sociedade moderna, e depois de uma reviravolta do destino acabou num corpo de uma criança prestes a entrar em Hogwarts. Ele prometeu que nesta vida iria explorar esta nova era, e aproveitar todas as oportunidades que tivesse para ir onde nenhum ouro e dinheiro pudessem chegar, e desde então começa uma lenda que terá o seu nome espalhado por todos os lugares e que conhece diferentes dimensões, assim como um certo Merlin. (Com a indicação de um leitor estarei postando em Português como meu idioma nativo. Não tenho muita experiência com escrita, então ainda estou aprendendo, espero que vocês me ajudem. Muitos personagens pertencem a seus respectivos autores, então além do personagem que estarei criando em meu caminho, o resto tem seu dono!) https://www.patreon.com/KingDovahkiin este é o meu Patreon.5 Chs 11 Collections
I searched but couldn't find this. Where could I find it?
Otsutsuki: The Path to Supremacy
Anime & Comics · KingDovahkiin