It looks like a lot of response from the gpt chat, while I'm not against it, maybe a change in them could be more interesting, I wasn't going to comment, but since I've already gotten this far
Lein emphasized that merging their floating islands did not mean destroying individual islands. Instead, it meant staying within the same area so that if any member needed help, others could quickly provide support. This created a strong sense of community and solidarity among members.
Games · Riski_Bambang
first can is not necessary, or rather, it does not make sense
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Fantasy · Small_Otaku
. ≠ , higher up Those in the middle of the sentence, without need
When 5 of those hawk Monsters got killed by the Emperor, suddenly other Monsters realized what was happening. so they wanted to turn around to counterattack. Unfortunately for them, before they can do anything almost 20 bullets hit those remaining 5 Monsters.
Fantasy · Small_Otaku
techer or teacher? the discord link is expired, you have to put it so it doesn't expire
Chapter 9 - Hugged from Teacher Michael
Fantasy · Small_Otaku
There are several of these throughout, but everything in the same paragraph was very strange, I think the only time it was used correctly was at the beginning, man, creating is hard, but don't give up
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Fantasy · Small_Otaku
Did you mean interface?
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Fantasy · Small_Otaku
If this paragraph is correct, it conflicts with the next paragraph, and it appears that Xin was using the stick
Xin then thought that it would be best to battle him with a more serious attacks. Thinking of it, he made his staff to swirl and then prepared for an all-out battle.
Action · pantserplotter
It could be written in a better way, avoiding one person's speech and describing another person afterwards, well, taking into account the perspective, the way it was done here it seems a bit confusing, well, I say avoid the annoying people from the web novel who pick on grammar
He rotated his staff then dashed towards the Xin. The enemy went again in the offensive but this time around, Xin was also in the offensive. Xin smashed his staff and the enemy deflected it with weapon . Another smash was made but he received it with his staff.
Action · pantserplotter
There's something missing here
The referee made them approach each other and then while approaching, Zoan was cracking his neck and knuckles. can only smirk at the moment. It was then, they shook hands with each other. The referee then stated the rules in combat without delays.
Action · pantserplotter
It's not bad, just some structures that look weird
Lein emphasized that merging their floating islands did not mean destroying individual islands. Instead, it meant staying within the same area so that if any member needed help, others could quickly provide support. This created a strong sense of community and solidarity among members.
Floating Island - Triple S Talent
Games · Riski_Bambang