Ouch! That’s hurt! No…I am being serious. You might want to fix this part, because ML SE didnt really like unnecessary narration. I am not being sarcastic or what, since you might interpret in a wrong way.
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Fantasy · 12thFailedGenius
Really? I guess I need to fix it then 😪 Guess you read the latest book, right?
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Fantasy · 12thFailedGenius
Nah…it just I usually skip this kind of narration
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Fantasy · 12thFailedGenius
Is this some kind of prologue?
So Anna is Ann, thanks Author nim for the clarification ❤️
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Fantasy · FantasiaLia09
Lol I did, but utterly confused 😂
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Fantasy · FantasiaLia09
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
So, I’m on chapter 6, and a lot has happened already. First, Ovelia’s adoptive family is the worst. At first, I thought her sister might be nice, but nope, she’s just as bad as the rest of them. Well, her background story might make you root for her more! Then there’s Ace, the male lead. He’s your typical werewolf Alpha…bossy and intense. At one point, he’s all, “I’ll tear them off,” which, hmm…you know, but also kinda what you’d expect. Classic. The pace moves pretty fast, which keeps things interesting but the transition between scenes felt a little choppy. Still, the story has a lot of potential, and I’m curious to see where it goes. Definitely worth checking out if you’re into werewolf and magic!
And I apologise if my words came out rude.
Destroyer Of The Worlds
Fantasy · 12thFailedGenius