The_White_Bear_33

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1 months ago
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The story seems interesting.😁 However, I'm not sure it's worth getting into if new chapters aren't released regularly. Maybe I'll wait until it's finished. 🤔 There are also a lot of elements that defy logic, for example, why Nina defended her utterly lousy family from being killed by the alpha? It makes absolutely no sense. 🤷🏼She would be free without them. 💁🏼So what if she only has a few days to live? Such an opportunity might never come again. And if she survives, she'll have to watch them bask in wealth and honor, at her expense. 😖 Is this some kind of deliberate Stockholm syndrome? 😑I hope this terrible trio will be punished handsomely in the next chapters. 😈

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The_White_Bear_33
1 months ago
Replied to DaoistIQ2cDu

I'm very patient. It is worth the wait. Get better. 😊

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1 months ago
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4 months ago
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I actually came back to this comment to delete it, because I figured that after reading 30 chapters, I'd already practiced knowing when to move on to the next chapter and ignore the added comment. I didn't want to inconvenience the author unnecessarily, but I didn't have time to do so before he read it. Thank you for considering my request. I was truly captivated by this story, as its continuation is more difficult to predict than in similar novels of this type. I'm curious to see how it will unfold. Congratulations on your imagination. ;)

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The_White_Bear_33
4 months ago
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These author comments at the end of each chapter distract me from reading. Authors have a space for their comments below the chapter text. I recommend leaving them there so as not to spoil the reader's enjoyment with each chapter...

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5 months ago
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Wolf? From when? This story... #AIscripted

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Amara seemed more put-together tonight than yesterday. She hurried to Sebastian's side on quick, dainty steps, tugging at his arm with familiar ease that made my wolf go crazy inside me.

Abandoned Luna: Now Untouchable

Abandoned Luna: Now Untouchable

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