Good start! It's a really interesting concept! The writing may be a little hard to understand at times but overall I'm really interested to see how everything develops.
Well said!
Her parents didn't leave the house - when l wrote family members, l meant like extended family members e.g aunts, uncles
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Unfortunate Lives system
Fantasy · Concubinebeauty
The writing is really good and the author does a great job when writing the characters. The setting is also very unique and up to where l read, everything was really shrouded in mystery. The only thing l don't understand is how the relationship between the male and female protagonists can improve so fast. Anyways, l highly recommend this for those who like romance.
Mei Qinghua is supposed to be in middle school but because she 'has no money', she's getting tutored at home. Most of her money is spent on clothes, makeup etc so that she looks expensive and fits in with the rich people
Furthermore, her background is very shady and it cannot be investigated easily - who would believe that a little girl who hasn't even gone to middle school can make connections so coincidentally with the sons of very powerful families? Such a thing cannot be a coincidence.
Unfortunate Lives system
Fantasy · Concubinebeauty
Shameless review from myself - it's worth reading that's for sure! Just take a look and you will enjoy it immensely~ Also, thanks to everyone who has supported me!
This setting is really interesting - l love the realism elements. I find myself sympathising with Noe at every turn and the fact that he is so rejected by the world. There is so much mystery and intrigue and the author writes brilliantly. This novel is like an uncut diamond gradually being moulded into shape! Truly amazing!
This is really interesting! What really caught me was the picture for the book! The concept is really unique and it gives me anime-like vibes. Good work author and l can't wait to read on and see!
This is such a good book! I actually couldn't help myself and Solana is really a gem! Everything is written so seamlessly and l am really rooting for her - l hope she achieves her dreams!
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original Unfortunate Lives system
4.85
Have you ever wondered what your life's trajectory would be? What if it is bad? What if you got a second chance to turn your life around? Would you take it? ---39 Chs 60 Collections
So firstly, the writing quality is good and it's easy to understand the development of the story. Within 4 chapters, we can already see some adaption to the situation from the main character. However, there really is a lot of plot armour. Too many things happen by coincidence - l don't know whether this is good or bad but it's something to keep in mind. Apart from that, the world background is fairly simple but what makes the story stand out is the style of writing - it's very lighthearted and conversational. Really makes you feel like you're hearing a story instead of reading one. The character design is very good - it's very endearing to see a system story where the main character is not too overpowered from the start. I'm definitely going to keep reading this story to see how things go.
A villain's path to being a white lotus
Fantasy · SpicyChickenWriter