It isn't your character XD I was doing some small trolling
"I- I yield! Please...!"
Video Games · Alex_Simmonds
Hahahaha
"Damned Cathar! Why don't you just DIE!?" A force pull yanked her off balance and dragged her through the air, kicking and struggling, towards the most ornately dressed Sith.
Video Games · Alex_Simmonds
I look back at the others who stepped away from me and rosalie earlier. Even my own coven! (Insert your fave shocked/offended gif here).
Movies · EmphieIsMe
Hahahaha good chapter!
I'll come back tomorrow to read the rest. Good work so far!
'She has a point, the British also got attacked, they will retaliate.' Should be changed to make more sense and make it not seem as if the outcome was always predestined. Perhaps: ' She had a point. The British were likewise assaulted in such a way, they would wish to retaliate against those who had wounded their pride.
Everyone looked at Anastasia. She has a point, the British also got attacked, they will retaliate. No one wants to fight against a Russo-Anglo alliance. Especially now that Russia is no longer the Russia from before. It can now compete against Germany and Britain in strength and influence.
Book&Literature · Lumine007
'Holy City's ' makes no sense... Change it to: 'Holy Cities'
"This is why we inform the British, with them on our side the other Great Powers will hesitate to support the Ottomans. This is also an opportunity to liberate the Balkans and our Holy City's."
Book&Literature · Lumine007
'But this one's different' could be switched to: 'This war would be unique, unlike previous wars fought... A pitched battle against a major power...'
Everyone's face went grim, this means war. But this one's is different, unlike the one against Japan were most were neutral until the end, this time its a 'Great Power'.
Book&Literature · Lumine007
'this means war' is perhaps better exchanged for 'this meant war'
Everyone's face went grim, this means war. But this one's is different, unlike the one against Japan were most were neutral until the end, this time its a 'Great Power'.
Book&Literature · Lumine007
XD
"More than that. Don't you see, she will revolutionise the way Humanity perceives money and value. The digital isn't technically real, but its effect is truly beyond real... Therefor it has a value beyond most countries... Imagine, a space where the poor can be truly equal to the rich. One where the class differences and racial differences slip away into a digital creation of their own personality and individuality. Included with her games, this could, truly, lead humanity down a more peaceful path."
Game Creator Multiversal (Marvel/DC)
Video Games · Alex_Simmonds