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Finally, a book that his word building in it. I wanted to find such a book for some time but nothing caught my attention.
For what it's worth, I really enjoyed this story. It was nice to see someone write long chapters for readers (even though clarity was never the best) but I will advise you to keep going on and improve in the future as well.
Lol. This gives out major gothic vibes to me and I hope you'll include more of the explorable elements of mythology or it'll feel like a missed opportunity
It's really good with minimal mistakes which makes it readable. I find the formatting to be clear as well which puts me in a good mood while reading. I will be sticking around to it and see after 50+ chapters how I feel about it.
No. He'll not stay single forever, but he's also 11 right now. Harem tag is there because it will become a huge plot point pretty soon
The main romantic interest is in the background for now. Maybe MC will get a lover in the future but I'll set up the important bits first. I need to get the background of characters established first and relationships to hint at. Xion is so much trouble but fun to write too and her fem harem. I have plans for her alright
Taking Responsibility
The creator of Magic is Back as the Dual Magician
Fantasy · Design_backup
Study degree?
The synopsis seems catchy. The first few chapters are good as well and I can see this develop into more. The plot is just setting up so I will see how it developed before leaving more crit here
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original The creator of Magic is Back as the Dual Magician
4.9
Professor Milles, a certified genius and creator of the current magic system. Misha Raycraft, the 11 years old adopted magic-less son of the president. What do they both have in common? They are the same person. As a genius, professor Milles created the neural system, the origin of all magic which made the world reliant on it. It came as a blessing but professor Milles knew the truth - it was a curse that would doom everyone. To prevent this, he decided to travel in the future and look for a way to destroy the Neural system once the world was stable enough. Now, as Misha Raycraft, the 11 years old adopted magic-less Type Null adopted son of the president, he had a duty to carry out his mission. But before he could, he is stopped by a vision of world destruction and a legacy to prevent it. Now embedded with unimaginable magic powers, it is in the hand of Misha Raycraft to save the world from that destruction while hiding away his magic all the while. However, the task would become even more difficult as time passes on and more and more people begin getting involved in the salvation of the world. He would do it all, even if he had to become a Villian in the process. However, to do this he would need allies in this new period. Especially those who could help him out. But personal relationships of other people, namely - Xion and her harem of power female magicians hailed to have the best potential might hinder Milles and his journey. (Both the harem and Yuri are in the background for now and not with the MC but they will become very important elements in the future.)25 Chs 297 Collections
Looking forward to this book as well. From what I've read thus far, Lisa is in an interesting position. I cannot wait to see what is in store for her
An Ordinary Complex
Urban · Holy_mackrel