Mapguy

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Mapguy
Mapguy
2 years ago
Posted

The book is amazing, The characters are clearly distinguished. The story has a sense of mystery to it. And the world background is easy to imagine. The story is told with cinematic ambience that a makes it play out in the mind .Nice one author👍

Mapguy
Mapguy
2 years ago
Commented

Truck kun strikes again

After almost forty minutes of walking, Huno was on the other side of the hill and was almost down. He kept walking while looking at the sea. There was a small beach at this end of the hill. While he stared, he heard a screeching sound from behind getting louder instantly. He turned and found a small truck driving towards him. The driver's head seems down, resting on the wheel. He reacted, but it was late. A part of the truck caught his dress and dragged him along. Luckily, after a while, that part of his dress got torn, but he fell onto the beach.

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Fantasy · _King_Ace

Mapguy
Mapguy
2 years ago
Posted

This story is really interesting. it seems the wolf decides the premise for love . Leaving Alester to fight for the right to his own emotions. I'm curious as to how far things will develop from here. keep it up author😁👍

Mapguy
Mapguy
2 years ago
Replied to ssyffix

you just went and searched that up!?

       The sun was still up in the sky. Alsi was in deep thoughts over what happened in the dungeon. Of course he didn't think of it as some life changing experience that would haunt him forever. If anything, he already compared the dungeon boss to an Enderman from Minecraft.What was really eating at his mind was his final attack. Though Alsi had grown over the years in strength and skill. He wasn't really acquainted with water kine. The types he did gain some skill in were wind, lightning and fire, of which he was the most accustomed to. 

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Fantasy · Notion_Theory

Mapguy
Mapguy
2 years ago
Commented

nice chapter

Mapguy
Mapguy
2 years ago
Commented

Great way to end it. please upload some more😁

'..Because That's My Promise..'

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Teen · Rein_Fall

Mapguy
Mapguy
2 years ago
Commented

nice execution. the writing needs improvement but the story is interesting

Mapguy
Mapguy
2 years ago
Replied to ssyffix

😂😂😂😂😂

     She then saw Ceal look straight at her with a discretional expression. Serena immediately spinned her staff as she turned around and thrust it at an oncoming rock. As the rock broke into pieces the dark humanoid creature was now visible. She started to spin her staff around continuously. Destroying any threat that dared to hit her. This proceeded into a dance as she kept on spinning her staff at amazing speeds.

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Fantasy · Notion_Theory

Mapguy
Mapguy
2 years ago
Posted

Damn... Your writing is very poetic. And it draws the reader in to the thought s of the characters in the story. It becomes easy to sympathize with the MC whilst at the same time the story brings about a mysterious atmosphere.

Mapguy
Mapguy
2 years ago
Posted

I love the comedy In this book, I mean who would risk death over a bag of potato chips 😂. The story develops smoothly and the pacing of event is good. The diversity of your characters is also admirable. keep it up👍