Ms_p0udel

2yr

Commented

thank you for the chapter

ch 16 Chapter 14

Half-Blood Prince's Tale

Book&Literature · Klazy_Labbit

Ms_p0udel

2yr

Commented

rodolphos and bella ! haha! butterfly effect is too big.

ch 0 9 Chapter nine

Pansy Parkinson - doing it right this time -

Book&Literature · Timis

Ms_p0udel

2yr

Commented

Too short chapters.

ch 0 6 Chapter six

Pansy Parkinson - doing it right this time -

Book&Literature · Timis

Ms_p0udel

2yr

Posted

good................ .. . ....................dhaudu19 iwjbsiqnsbshjsjwbskskwnsjdnskallbdkdkjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjxjdjdkdjkdkdjdjdjdgwgdlkqxhwja

The New Hulk

Movies · Your_Drug_Supplier

Ms_p0udel

2yr

Posted

this is good this is good this is good this is good this is ggood .....................................m. .....mjkkkmmmmmkkkmmmmmmllllllll

Felicia Hardy MCU

Anime & Comics · White_Liger

Ms_p0udel

2yr

Posted

idk what to say.. lacks detail. i am usually not the type to leave negative criticism but this story kinda lacks some elements. mc gets things done rather easily. but that is not the main problem. the mcs morality is fluctuating. sometimes he is goody two shoes and sometimes he is brutal. justifications for is actions are lacking

Spider-man reincarnation (YT: Green Door/ type "green door blue lock")

Anime & Comics · Bad_Ken

Ms_p0udel

3yr

Posted

I did not think it would be any good• Its actually perfect so far• Explanation of ki and spiritual power is rather good and mystery of senju bean and dragon ball is well explained• i hope you dont drop it

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Half-Blood Prince's Tale

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The New Hulk

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Spider-man reincarnation (YT: Green Door/ type "green door blue lock")