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Mana core? you mean Seiðr? which similar if not the same but better. That aside author, this "change" that you keep throwing around attached to loki when it hasn't even been a "week" much less a full day for anyone to be certain of just doesn't have any weight. Should it not have been something mentioned like three times and both odin and frigga saying nothing but noting it but just observing more? and even with that supposed change there just isn't enough in the story so far for you to be insisting it so much

Author i have a question, why is he taking advantage of her mental state right now? why is it that almost every fanfic that's always the case in relation to Wanda? i'm pretty sure he could time travel and find a better time when she's mentally sound and dealt with her pain and trauma herself; why here? why now? I'm also starting to realize that he's very rarely referred to her as Wanda compared to the amount of times he does with "the Scarlet Witch". Thus it begs to question yet again, does he love her for her being the Scarlet Witch and and second as a person? like he could get another her in another reality as if she's replaceable like that. His inner monologue reads like one of those Japanese guys that was 64 that got reincarnated and fell in love with a 7 year old. Point is, it doesn't feel like he sees her as a person and more so The Scarlett Witch; which should be the opposite. I'm honestly loving the story but really disliking the way it's slowly turning out.

Keep it up author i enjoy reading your novel, how are you gonna develop his abilities tied to "Fun"(magic? concept?) is it what children consider Fun or what he does? is it gonna be similar to a God of Games capabilities? or just illusion through the power of his "Winter Spirit" side that becomes real through children's belief? or the Elsa route? either way i'm looking forward to it!!