The story plot and the world background is interesting! There are grammar issues but a bit of editing will solve that. My major issue is used of --- instead of "" for speaking. I know you put a description in an earlier chapter but the dash lines dont really read well, especially when there are two characters speaking in my opinion. This is more personal preference since I'm used to see " used for character dialogue as well. Other people might be fine with it so choose whichever works best for you. Beyond that the story is growing and has good potential! Keep up the great work!
The story building for this world and the description of the characters are really well done! My one tip for this novel is that you space out your paragraphs more. Break up some information to build up a sense of suspense for the next line. Other than that your story is really well done and immersive! Added it to my library and keep up the good work!
Wow, KDJ really did that.
Kyrgios turned his back to his disciple. He didn't know what happened to his prideful disciple but he would find out if he went to Murim.
Omniscient Reader
Urban · 싱숑
Another shameless author review. This novel is extremely different from my others. It plays heavily on the idea of good and evil. The main character will struggle with keeping his mortality in a wildly immoral city. Who truly deserves to be punished? Are there truly no such things justice in the city of Briagas? Get lost in this story and enjoy the whirlwind of events!
Hello everyone! Author here with a review for TOTGDK. This novel was originally my first and ment to one of my longest ones. This will have many twists and turns, betrayals and heartbreak. There will be many characters to enjoy, love, hate, etc. This novel will probably have about 3 to 4 volumes so look forward to that! I hope you all enjoy this epic tale!
I've been seeing other authors do this and decided to do a updated review for my novel. Prince of Food is a fun, more down to earth novel of mine. There will be laughs, love and crazy situations all around. The main characters will slowly come together, and grow together as well. Hope you all enjoy this novel, happy reading!
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original Cascade Hills
Cascade Hills, A rural town known for its beautiful forest, hospitality, and occasionally strange events. This quiet but strange town is home to Katherine, Alex, and Kristen. However, things are different in Cascade Hills, the once occasional strange happening has become too frequent. And long-buried secrets are starting to surface. Life in Cascade Hills will never be the same again. Are you ready for the fall?14 Chs 1 Collections
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The Devil That You Know
In Briagas, there is only one constant denominator. The powerful always win. Justice was merely a game that the powerful play with the weak. An unbalanced, demoralizing, and revealing game. A game that can change a sheep into a wolf and wolves into demons. However, there is one variant, the "Bloodhound of Briagas" as he is called. The cop is known to be the last pure white knight in all of Briagas. A clean light against the darkest night, saving unfortunate souls and howling against the ramped injustice in Briagas. The rare incorruptible man, Kai Hamilton. They call him the bloodhound of Briagas because no matter what he will always catch his prey. Unfortunately for him in Briagas, the hero's never last long. His fall from grace sends the underbelly of Briagas into a freezy, everyone vying for the possibility to become the new owner of the infamous Bloodhound of Briagas. And unfortunately for Kai, the "Devil of Briagas" is one of those such people. Can this hero cop continue to venomous keep his hands clean in this unfair world? Or will the righteous bloodhound become just like to wolves he has been hunting? ------ Release details: Also known as The Devil You Know Updates Wednesdays and Thursdays! Discord: https://discord.gg/T4kbgk6ECG21 Chs 1 Collections
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Prince of Food
Jackson Young and Kun Jung-Hee live completely polar opposite lives. Jackson Young lives an almost perfect life. Anything he wants is well within his reach and never has he had to work a day in his life. The Young family are known in the cooking world but such talents seemed to have evaded Jackson. However, Jackson is in for a very rude awakening ... Kun Jung-Hee has a very hard life. His family has been riddled with debts from his absent father who left them when Kun was in high school. Kun lives with his mother and three younger siblings. Being that man of the house, Kun had taken on more duties than average for his age. However Kun shoulders it all, but he could really use a good break... __________________________________ Release Details: New Chapter on Updates Tuesday and Saturdays Discord: https://discord.gg/T4kbgk6ECG Want to support me? Drop a review or feel free to give a tip to either my Patreon or my ko-fi. Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/Uylisis Ko-fi: https://ko-fi.com/uylisis25 Chs 15 Collections
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The Tale of The Great Daemon King
15 years ago, the lands of Shiofea were plunges into war. A war versus good and evil, right and wrong. A war that shaped Shiofea into a completely different country than it was in the past. The war against the Great Daemon King. The war lasted for many months, each side doing everything they could to overturn the tides of battle coupled with many plots and strained alliances. At the end of the battle, the Daemon King was sealed away in the Forsaken Burial grounds. A place that is now considered taboo for most people. Now the tale of Great Daemon King has been told for over generations however the tale itself is every changing from small details to big. Who truly was evil? Did the Daemon King die? Or even what truely happened to lead up to these events? So come and listen to the true tale of the Great Daemon King. A tale that is nothing more than a tragedy... ------- Read also on: Tapas: https://tapas.io/series/The-Tale-of-The-Great-Daemon-King/info Wattpad: https://www.wattpad.com/story/206431046-the-tale-of-the-great-daemon-king ------ Release Details: New Chapter on Mondays and Fridays! Discord: https://discord.gg/T4kbgk6ECG Want to support me? Drop a review or feel free to give a tip to either my Patreon or my ko-fi. Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/Uylisis Ko-fi: https://ko-fi.com/uylisis20 Chs 9 Collections
The quality of writing and the exposition for the background and characters are lovely written and detailed. I look forward to reading more!
Heaven's Flame
Fantasy · Sunus_Writes