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Amazing story! Do you have advanced chapters? I need more!! This is the kind of story I have been waiting for!

Glad you had the wake up woth Gilgamesh. If hes gunna be a King he has to act like one. And while physically your MC may not be one of the Top Tiers, with his GoB and clairvoyance he should be near the Top of the food chain so he should act like his on the top

The demensiobal gao surrounds the DxD verse and has connections to other Universes but since they were born in the Gap they are apart of DxD and can be considered its gaurdians

Just give him knowloedge of other mytholgies with maybe passing knowledge of DxD

Pretty awesome seeing him come into his powers and deal with the Thanagarians.

Nice. Really showed how strong Gilgamesh is. I hope you have him train so that ge reaches his full potential!

So is this an AU since Nawaki is an elite jonin and alive?

At this point yall gotta make Alan OP and kill every archangel slowly and painfully. I hope you destroys michael

Dude. You better have him humble the angels later.

You shouldnt let Shield or Fury have any power over Thor. Thor should straight up say Midgard is our protectorate and you have no power over legit any if our decisions

Love hoe the MC called supes out here. I love superman and hes a true hero but sometimes they just come across has hypocritical, like just now probably thousands of people died and he cares more about some alien dying

Now that Vader is the Force. You should have him slowly rebuild his living body. At this point it should be possibke

God

Gid knows Zadkiel is reincarnated right?

He could mention to Minato that he saw someone leaving in a space-time ninjutsu and give minato a heads up

Hey this is a really good fanfic idea! Hope you put some good chapters out! You should just have him become friends woth kushina a KCM 2 Kushina can handle most threats and also allow minato to live and at that point things can go much better