the story is good so far. the character design, good. the world building perfect. the grammar also is good. keep up the good work and update regularly
The story is good so as the character presentation. The wall you built the story's world is also not that bad. The English is perfect and there is use of punctuations. Keep up the good work
It is a great story though started making sense after some chapters but now, it is good๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
The book is amazing most especially the synopsis. The writer did a good work working on that. Well, read your book and I'll admit it is great. Keep up the good work
thank ๐ you and will make the correction
God of writing๐๐. At first, I was taken aback by the title but after reading the book, I know it deserves it. well written author. more knowledge to your ink
thank you
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Fantasy ยท Blah_blah_blah7899
Read it and it's amazing. At least an extraordinary novel on webnovel. I really like it. More knowledge on your ink dear Author. ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ
yes, they're Muslim names. Thank you
What an amazing and interesting book. The writer really did a great job while writing it. Keep it up, the book is amazing and interesting. The twists, plots, everything A1. More knowledge and ink to your pen
My Man Is A Villain, So Am I!
Fantasy ยท Soun_Phavin