Enjoyed this from beginning to end![img=recommend]
I’m certain that this will be made into a movie!
Are you planning any new chapter releases?
You have a good story! The plot and character development are going well! I’m sorry you have had to deal with what must be a difficult malfunction. I’t has been a little frustrating as a reader, but seeing our willingness to muster through should give you confidence that you are producing good works. Good Luck Vic!
Tim is everything ok? It’s been awhile since any new releases!
He can’t meet Ray here. This is the time that Ray placed himself in the tablet
The characters and plot are a huge draw as the underdogs strive to persevere over a seemingly impossible system that seems reward the worst aspects of humanity. It is an amazing thing to watch as Sen comes to realize there are things worth saving in humanity by com to understandinging the nurturing vertues of his own Psyche.
The story and characters show so much development and the plot really Keeps You wondering how Quinn and his friends will manage to solve their problems without compromising their goals or loosing who they are!
The story and characters really draw you in and the Plot is surprising and stays real to the characters. The characters are 3 dimensional and really evolve as the story progresses
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At this point everyone else around had fled the area in fear of being collateral damage. The man with shades happened to be winning the fight and had laid out most of Dildier's men.
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