David_Robbins_0723

I really like this light novel the stories been good so far and I want to continue reading it but the last 10 or so chapters the spelling and or translation is pathetic. it's hard to read the story when it looks like some half assed, typed it and hit spell correct and sent it through without any proof read. names jump around the text is half broken and you can only use context clues to give you a chance at seeing where the story goes.

the spelling has been atrocious the last 3 or 4 chapters what the hwll is going on its so bad it effects the way its read through that part. I think you should proof read your chapters before you post

could you stop using asterks to switch pov and what not some people use the audio of the chapter and it literally say asterisk 20 plus times, it's onlya minor annoyance. good book so far, keep up the good writing.

he can't showcase the shadow because he will blow his cover. it will either be his charm skills,making everyone obey commands or fall for him or one of his stats like strength or speed but I'm leaning towards the charm skills