don't give up .... I will read it.... and later review it as per my knowledge ... alright 👍😊
awesome
Almost fine and a bit interesting ----________________'_________________''''''''______________________________________________________________
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Mistress Of Enchanting Dragon
Fantasy · Dream_blue98
I guess you want to say that please to read
The story is over all nice and my favourite character is i guess you know but i want to told you separately that it's ~~~~larry oh my he is so cool pleased to write and i want more chapters
It's good but i want more chapters please i want to know what happened to the kid after wards the novel is overall classic...the character are yet to develop bond but still it's my type of novel...
AMAZING 😁😁😁😁😁 so good keep going....though there is a bit of confusion about the main lead but i guess the still is just start to began so it will take time to take a shape although it's good
I must say it's good but I want that there is some clearly description over characters i got a little confused but it's fine .I like her dog it's good if there is some more about scene and description about it
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original Dusky Shadow
Tip-top, tip-top.....in the dungeon cell a kid who is 7 years old consider a test project fighting against demon's......but she was not afraid of the dungeon and the dark prison cell she was locked up ...... She asked to one of the old magician who was performing the rituals to open the dungeon door.........and throwing a small child into it as a test project...... ....Will I be of help....to my brother.......he is also a magician in this tower..... That old magician with a creepy smile on his lips said........ Oh!!! Is he....I wonder who he is?? Than he continued as ------ But I will assure you that ,if you do as instructed......it will be of a great help to your brother...... The little girl smile cheerfully and instantly drop herself from the platform where she is standing.........and said... I am so happy like never before........my brother........ As her bones are crushing and her skin began to burn....in no time she became a corpse....... inside the dungeon....... What is going to happen next? Why her brother did not came to protect her? Is there's any chance that she will survive?........or reincarnation again into this world....... To know all this questions Read my latest novel.......... "" DUSKY SHADOW ""8 Chs 4 Collections
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Angle niger Feather
hah......So all this time.... I have been betrayed by her......and still believe that may be their is hope.... .I ...I thought that...she must be manipulated by something or someone....but .... As Tara fall down on the floor who was a white witch in her previous life felt sore.... She has been betrayed by the saint who she helped and in return she got.... what nothing but pain...... As she suddenly remembered what God of heaven said to her after she died as a witch..... He said.... "This time not just for Satisfaction but live a life with no regret" She figured out that God must knew her true colour.....up until yesterday....she believes that saint is innocent..no to be precious...she want to believe in that.....but ... it's all clear know.....as she wiped her tears from her eyes....... by cutting her left hand's palm... with a knife.. blood flow down from her veins to the magic circle..she is standing over......and said..... "My revenge....I will arvege my death...... " My dear saint.......... The show is just yet to began Do you wanna know how she is able to find saint true personality? or. How is she going to take her revenge? What's going to happen next....for more please read my novel........ """""' Angel Niger feather"""""""14 Chs 5 Collections
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The Untitled Citizens
*Knock knock* There is a heavy *knock" on the door in the middle of the night Mr Philippe supul who is wondering for this whole night. where his wife is thought that its must be her And open the door with a concern face and low *sigh* by fixing his gaze on the clock table. The door opened with a rusty noise which shows the fact that its really old. Crrrr...eeee..k! Maria where you have been and you got hurt again. (Mr. S) ........ ( Mrs Maria Xer supul )his wife Ok first come inside. After he finishes Maria's wound dressing he ask.... Are you going to tell me anything about your struggle or just keep making the same gesture. I told you when the time is right I will tell you everything but please until then don't ask anything..... (His wife) (Sigh). Deaply ..Ok! I will wait ...... Don't you want to know what his wife is hiding from him? What is the reason that she has to came back home late at night covered in Bruises and wounds ? Lets find out by reading my new novel The Untitled Citizens [CUT]5 Chs 2 Collections
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Dusky Shadow
Fantasy · Mint0000