Holo_Lover

Holo_Lover

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I write dog shit FF's sometimes, you're welcome.

2021-05-13 Joined Global
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Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
9 days ago
Posted

To be quite honest, the DXD and Hellsing part left me quite absorbed in reading, but when it got to the Harry Potter part... It left me disappointed, it's as if the story went from 100 points to 50 in the blink of an eye. Harry being Rose Potter, and good nature characters actually being evil? Very cliché, there are already so many stories like this that it has lost its charm. And Valeria literally telling Rose everything about Hellsing, which by the way is a Top Secret organization, when they met in less than an hour? Not to mention that Valeria was on a DISGUISED mission? The worst undercover agent in the world. Pretty disappointing. Anyway, there are three universes mixed together, I can only see it becoming a complete mess, but I still have hope, I'll keep reading it for now.

Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
13 days ago
Posted

I'm going to give my honest review, I hope the author doesn't feel offended or demotivated by it. Firstly, the name of the book is extremely misleading. Author, being completely frank and honest with you, she is not Slaneesh, nor has she been reincarnated as her. She was just reincarnated as a demon-looking mutant, that's all. I was quite disappointed at first, as I thought I would see a Chaos God in Marvel causing confusion and terror, not a girl born as a mutant with the appearance of a demon, it's better to change the name of the book to 'Marvel: I Reincarnated as a Demon' to be honest. That said, my advice is to change the name of the book, because as I said, it is extremely misleading. Secondly, it has two systems, the gacha/template one I understand, but the class one is completely useless so far to be honest. Other than that, it's a good read.

Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
27 days ago
Posted

For those of you who came to the reviews to see if it's worth reading, just know that if you are very particular about how the author writes, plot holes and everything else, then this book is not for you. The book is well written, there are almost no grammatical errors, but there are many things that could have been done better. However, as the author mentioned, he is just doing this for fun in his free time. In short, if you are very critical, don't read it, you won't like it. If you read just for fun, like me, then I recommend reading it, it's an interesting story despite everything.

Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
1 months ago
Commented

Did she forgot about the ZZZ MC's? Or hasn't been a day yet?

Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
1 months ago
Commented

Actually the kryptonians learning skills is god-like. Superman once had to lear medicine to save Louis, and in 10 minutes, reading all of the books in the library, he became a full doctor

Kryptonians will even yield double the results with half the effort due to their incredible physical condition and mental fortitude—if they have the opportunity to master this power.

Dc: Start Female Superman

Dc: Start Female Superman

Anime & Comics · Jose_Figuer

Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
4 months ago
Replied to ArtoriaPendragon_

I see. A suggestion, if you'd like. Just use the MC lover's names normally in general contexts, and in moments of lemon and romance use whatever terms of endearment you want to use. Like, they're with their team? She call her M'gann or Miss Mars. They are alone in MC's room? She calls her love, babe, etc. The thing is, there is no problem with the MC calling M'gann love, babe, etc, but it's weird when it's used all the time.

"It's alright my love, it's alright, let it all out" Gwen softly whispered, bringing her close as J'onn continued.

SpiderGwen: I have a system?!

SpiderGwen: I have a system?!

Anime & Comics · ArtoriaPendragon_

Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
4 months ago
Commented

Just one thing that bothers me and I wanted to say, the MC calling M'gann 'My Love' all the time. Honestly, it's VERY cheesy and weird, they are teenagers who have been dating for less than a month, not an old couple in their 70s. This isn't constructive criticism or anything, or me asking the author to change this, it's just something that has been bothering me and wanted to say. Other than that, great story.

"It's alright my love, it's alright, let it all out" Gwen softly whispered, bringing her close as J'onn continued.

SpiderGwen: I have a system?!

SpiderGwen: I have a system?!

Anime & Comics · ArtoriaPendragon_

Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
7 months ago
Replied to chandler_Bullock

I guess I will make one

Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
7 months ago
Replied to Reiya9

I agree.

Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
7 months ago
Replied to PABELO

I already have an Overlord fic, it's called Overlord: Guild Wars

Anyway, I don't know if I'm going to write another book for now.

Tensura: Tiamat

Tensura: Tiamat

Anime & Comics · Holo_Lover