Holo_Lover

Holo_Lover

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I write dog shit FF's sometimes, you're welcome.

2021-05-13 Joined Global
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Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
8 days ago
Replied to TunaBoi

This is what me made stop watching the show. Gleen was one of the most charismatic and complete character on the series. He started from a weak and low esteem boy, to a badass survival man. Then out of nowhere, they killed him.

"But we'll adapt," Luke Li said, looking at him. "Humanity's strongest ability isn't fighting. It's adapting. Today, you learned how to string wire, set tripwires, and hammer wooden stakes. Could you do that yesterday?"

The Walking Dead: Zomboid System

The Walking Dead: Zomboid System

TV · GhostParser

Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
12 days ago
Commented

While I like the fic, I hope to see some action soon. Every superman fanfic for some reason is a slice of life most of the time....I just wanna read some superman action for once

Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
15 days ago
Commented

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Not that it even matters or is relevant anymore. Why, you might ask? Hold on, I'll answer after I drink this titty milk.

Reborn Ruin Princess

Reborn Ruin Princess

Anime & Comics · Saeko_Kaburagi

Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
17 days ago
Posted

First of all, I understand that this may be the author's first fanfic, and I also understand that it was written with the help of AI, but I'll give my honest review. The story was quite interesting until the Mikaelson family arrived. The protagonist's objective was to watch the story unfold, and always had been – until their arrival. After their introduction, instead of seeming like an ancient and mysterious being who will watch and sometimes change things in the canon that she did not like (which was her main goal), she suddenly changes completely for no reason at all and now seems more like a lonely teenage aunt who are constantly in touch with them. The entire construction of an ancient and mystical being fell apart completely, and the story after that seems out of control and rushed, as if nothing was thought through. In any case, read it and give it a chance.

Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
22 days ago
Commented

Nice read until now. Just saying, but if you want to know the limits of superman, author, you can always check out the strongest version of superman - superboy prime - he is without a doubt the strongest version, capable of defeating even beings that have reality manipulation and destroying realities with a single focused punch. He is also one of the coolest too.

Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
22 days ago
Commented

Yeah I get you. Every time I read 'brothers' on these situations I can't help but think about chinese fics. On these situations you can use just use 'Friends' or 'Gang' instead of Brothers.

(A.N: I really wanted to use another word here hehe...)

Marvel: Reincarnated as Superman

Marvel: Reincarnated as Superman

Anime & Comics · NovaaScribe

Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
1 months ago
Replied to Ashborn_chaos

Don't have the time to write anymore, sorry

Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
1 months ago
Replied to TheEternalGod

Don't have the time to write anymore

Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
1 months ago
Replied to Ashborn_chaos

You mean my Tiamat book? Only here on webnovel, and It's dropped sadly. You can find it on my profile

Holo_Lover
Holo_Lover
3 months ago
Posted

To be completely honest, the original author knows absolutely nothing about reproducing the character's personalities; they all seem like boring Chinese characters, the dialogue and thoughts are absurdly generic, without any semblance of the original Naruto character's personalities. But I liked the character/commentary system, and of course, I'm giving it a chance because of the translator's hard work.