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I love reading and writing books about a character that can be strong but doesn't because of boredom or is to lazy

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8 months ago
Replied to greatcheesemaster

Thanks for the insight. I have noticed my grammar has been "funky" and have tried to fix it and didn't really know if I fixed it or not. So thank you for telling me this

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2 years ago
Replied to Corbop

thanks for telling me I will edit that part

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2 years ago
Replied to APPLE

basically the part that should be a blade is a wand

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The Demon Flower System

The Demon Flower System

Fantasy · error16291

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2 years ago
Replied to Empyrium

thank you for pointing that out

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2 years ago
Replied to Ultimate_AE

I forgot since I caught up ans haven't read in a while. Let me reread and tell you about jt.

Even though his family was poor, Moby was happy with his living situation. He was always cheerful and never complained. He loved practicing martial arts every day, and he was thankful for having a kind and loving family. It seemed like he had a bright future ahead of him, especially after he receives the ability his parents had been working so hard to buy him.

The Great Demon System

The Great Demon System

Fantasy · Drip

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2 years ago
Replied to SHAD0W_REAPER

it's suppose to be angels but auto correct changed it. I'm going back to it to fix it

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The Demon Flower System

The Demon Flower System

Fantasy · error16291

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2 years ago
Replied to NormL

No it's okay. You pointing these things help actually help me fix my mistakes in previous chapters. So it's really helpful of you to point them out.

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3 years ago
Replied to Frederick_oren

I don't know what you mean but someone called this in a previous chapter saying the Mc was going to get a mask.

"Five Zils for one mask."

God of Tricksters

God of Tricksters

Fantasy · Fixten

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3 years ago
Replied to error16291

actually it depends on how you look at romance.

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3 years ago
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maybe I don't want spoil to much of the future parts of this.

  • The World Of The Mad Man original

    The World Of The Mad Man

    Fantasy ACTION REINCARNATION MAGIC DARK VILLAIN FASTPACED

    To others they could say that this young man has always been absent and dumb. When he hurt himself he always did not cry nor did he show any signs of pain, he just looked at his hand and just stare at the cut. When he was bullied, he never fought back, never told a teacher, nor even told his parent. All he did was just stare at the bullies with eyes that seemed to pierce their soul. When his parents divorced on his graduation day, he did not cry or beg them to get together. All he did was just stare at them both and smile. Even on his death bed, when his organs were failing, when his mind was dying. He didn't cry, he didn't say any regrets nor leave anything behind, all he did was just have a frown on his face. That frown was the only thing that people could say was normal about him before his eyes closed forever. Or at least that was how everyone saw him. But what they saw was far from the truth. The young man they saw since he was little boy or even as a adult was in truth never dumb or absent at all. No, no, no he was far from that. When he had a cut on his hand, he did not cry because he was curious as to what had caused him to get cut. The grass? But its so thin and soft, so how did it cut? It was because it was thin and soft that it was able to cut his hand. When his bullies punched him and pushed him, he did not try to save himself. Instead he just analyzed them. "So if I swing my arm like that, then it has enough force to bring this much pain to a body. If I hit that part, it will cause a person to gasp for breath." When his parents divorced, he didn't cry or beg them to get back together. He instead confirmed a theory going on his head since he was a five year old child. "I knew they were going to get divorce, it was so obvious since dad was always so quite and mom was so loud. They could never agree with one another, it was so obvious." When he was on the death bed he was in great pain and felt so weak. But he just frowned as he could not do one thing in his life or examine one thing at least. "How do people react to pain? How do people react to loss? How do people react to when they are at deaths door?" Those were his only thoughts when he closed his eyes. But his eyes would not be closed forever. No, no, no, they would soon open. And when they opened in the new world, would he be able to answer the questions he had made at his death bed and even more beyond it.

    10 Chs 13 Collections

  • The Great Pandemonium original

    The Great Pandemonium

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION DARK SURVIVAL FASTPACED MYTH NO-HAREM WIZARDS

    A young boy dies and is greeted by a being that calls itself The Keeper. It tells the young boy that it is bored and it wants him to entertain it by going into a world completely different from his own. Either going to a new world or being trapped in endless darkness for all of eternity, the boy decides to accept The Keeper's deal and is sent to the new world. Only to regret it as he is dropped onto one of the five continents and the one he was dropped into was the most dangerous one of them all.

    2 Chs 1 Collections

  • The Hollow Hive God (Dropped) original

    The Hollow Hive God (Dropped)

    Sci-fi ACTION ADVENTURE VILLAIN NONHUMAN CONQUER EVOLUTION ADVANCEDTECHNOLOGY MUTATION

    A young man finds himself in a tube surrounded by beings he has no clue could be. He is subjugated into experiments that changed his DNA to degrees that no one could even recognize what he was originally. After who knows how long he is given a task by these beings, to invade another world. This world, like his own held humans in them, but were far different. For in here Gods truly existed and truly held a domain in the world's law. Not only that but humanity as a whole had somehow united under one banner and progressed to such technological heights that it couldn't be compared to humanity in the past. With this task in hand, he now moves towards this new world with a swarm that is always hungry and hopes he can give this world either a quick end so they don't have to face what these beings did to his or some hope of being able to fight back against them. (If someone wishes to use this for their work they can, but tell me about it so I can read it as well you can also use the image for the cover)

    5 Chs 18 Collections

  • The Demon Flower System original

    The Demon Flower System

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SYSTEM COMEDY

    A young 17 year old man who loved the way plants of all sorts looked and acted like. Til one day he was killed while helping someone who was getting mugged. He was given a second chance by a God of his world, called the world master, who wanted him to attack and claim another God's world for him. Accepting this task he is given the body and personality of a flower and meets various situation and events on his journey to dominate the new world he is in. (hello there, this will be my first book so there might be some mistakes. If there are any please point it that way I can try to fix them if possible.)

    70 Chs 120 Collections

  • Bar system original

    Bar system

    Action ACTION REINCARNATION SYSTEM VILLAIN

    A man who lost everything because of a "trusted" friend heads to a bar to cool his head down and contemplate on what he was going to do from now on. The owner of the bar soon offers the man a job to work at the bar the next day and the man agrees. Once he returns to the bar the next day he is introduced to the world of power and is offered to work at a bar that the man will own in another world filled with hero's and villains. The man agrees and is sent to the new world to work for the bar and live however he wants to live, either by instigating a gang war, destroying hero's, or just live a normal quiet life. The choice is up to Victor to choose.

    16 Chs 52 Collections

  • The Wandering Kolozzal (Dropped) original

    The Wandering Kolozzal (Dropped)

    Fantasy MAGIC OVERPOWERED LEVELUP VIDEOGAME EVOLUTION NPC

    A video game company suddenly announces a beta version VR game that was said to revolutionize how the gaming world would work from simple adventures to being able to create relationships with npcs to players to becoming a god, one can only imagine how many people applied for the beta version. As the beta version was coming to a close and the real game was about to be launched, the game company asks several of the participants if they wished to participate in a new device that another company asked them to test out. With rewards that no sane person could say no to, they agreed and had their brain waves copied and put into a machine. Little did they know was that their brain waves was snipped and combined together to create a AI that acted like a living being and was fully aware of its existence. The gaming company soon put the AI into one of the most powerful species in the game, the Kolozzal. A creature that was so close to nature and so strong that it was said that it was the true apex of the world before the first God was born. Of course they didn't expect that the AI that was generated with human thoughts would not use its godly strength to dominate the world or wipe all life from the planet or overthrow the gods like the rest of its species, but instead live a comfortable life with a small village of players expanding on its back.

    6 Chs 3 Collections

  • The Hollow Zone (Dropped) original

    The Hollow Zone (Dropped)

    Sci-fi EVOLUTION MUTATION

    A man dies due to a earthquake and gets transported to a place where he thinks is "another world." Here he discovers that his species of creatures in this new world gets stronger the more they hunt and eat creatures to the point where their physical and mental form are enhanced. A month in this new life he sees humans, discovering that he wasn't in a new world but in a area on earth that was revealed thanks to the earthquake. Will he turn on the humans leading swarms of creatures to attack them or will he side by them and help them in this new world. (Hi, this is the author as you probably can see this novel has been dropped due to a major reason that impacts this novel, I do not know much about animal biology. I'm keeping the chapters up so authors who wish to use my novel as a inspiration could do so.)

    23 Chs 13 Collections

  • The Monster Dungeon original

    The Monster Dungeon

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM MAGIC OVERPOWERED SURVIVAL IMMORTAL EVOLUTION FASTPACED

    A being awakens in a dark space that has no end nor a beginning. He is greeted by a being calling itself a "God" as it introduces him to a world where magic and knights exists. It offers' the being a chance to be apart of a species of creatures called Monsters, creatures that reside inside of space called Dungeons that people called Delvers or Adventurers explore in search of fame and glory. The being agrees to the "Gods'" offer and he is given two abilities to aid him in his new life. He is soon sent off to one of these dungeons, awaiting for what life has to offer it.

    0 Chs 0 Collections

  • The Elemental Blade Bound Chronicles (Dropped) original

    The Elemental Blade Bound Chronicles (Dropped)

    Fantasy ADVENTURE MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG VILLAIN SURVIVAL ACADEMY FASTPACED MYTH

    A young man wakes up at the base of a mountain wondering how he got here. He is soon flooded by memories of his past, or in better words the bad parts of his past. He soon faces enemies that force him to climb up the mountain and meet his teacher. After he learned all that he could he soon travels the land to see what the world has to offer as a traveling warrior. (Dropped)

    0 Chs 1 Collections