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original Life is great, but not for me!
Life is great, but not for me! An amnesic author who had survived a vicious "accident" dies a terrible death and is reincarnated as a... girl?!? In a strange world that is akin to the books they once wrote, they start off as a baby with all of what remains of their previous knowledge with one goal! To find the people who isekai'd them and pay them back in kind! Who knows what'll happen on the way to that goal? A/N: This is my first work released to the public and serves as the first iteration of the story. Expect flaws and leave your thoughts if you choose to read.39 Chs 10 Collections
Hey there! This is your 110%, not a bot review! I had read up to chapter five and really enjoyed the idea of the world!. Seems like there is an intergalactic ranking of beings and the idea that one would take pity and save a hyuuuman babe was really fun to imagine. The only thing that made me really disinterested in continuing was the pace at which events were happening. I felt as though it was just lightspeed with how we moved from the mom to the AI and then to the whole debacle. Feels like there was a lot of missed opportunity to tell a story there. You just started to there is plenty of time to go back and mess around with it if you wanted to, which I encourage. I think you have something that'd be really cool if you developed it a bit more. Keep at it!
The Paragon Magi
Fantasy · Zeebie