Oh? My fault, I was revising some of the dialogue and deleted a major part of the chapter. I've now updated it, what you missed should be there now, but I must say that it is a lot😭🙏
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Fantasy · XeroXp
Zya is definitely a character some people aren't going to like too much. She the Misato of this Novel frfr, Asher is mentally a child when you think about it. Overall, novel is good so far, Bale got that whole lightskinned tendency to hype frfr. Bro keep hyping himself up. Skystrider will be Skystrider so I expect a large number of deaths or mayhem taking place.
Kinda sexist ngl
Miss Kim looked like she was thinking about it and Jin smirked. Now Miss Kim will definitely think he was a great person. Just look at how he came to this weakling's aid. Only one more step and he will take over H&C advertisement from her. She didn't deserve to run a company like this one. Didn't she know that a woman's place is in the kitchen?
Urban · D_RegalInsomniac
After an hour of reading, I'd say that the overdoing of erotica is the only flaw. I really hope the author make a few changes
Ayo😂
"Should I even be looking at this?" Vyn questioned, still peering at the creature's behind.
Fantasy · Lord_Lewd
Dude, we're all broke.
Dude, we're all broke.
Finally, a Harem Erotica with an actual plot existing! That aside, you're going to be choking with laughter while reading this, Vyn and Von are one of the most perverse main characters you'll find In Webnovel.
Thanks for the feedback and for being my first reader. By all means, go ahead, suggestions are always appreciated.
Powerless Transcension
Fantasy · XeroXp