anotheridiot

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2021-05-05 Joined Global
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anotheridiot
anotheridiot
1 years ago
Commented

its perfect as it is but with better editing its gonna be legendary

anotheridiot
anotheridiot
1 years ago
Commented

yes

if yes comment or give stones.

In a new book

In a new book

Video Games · The_Lazy_Panda

anotheridiot
anotheridiot
1 years ago
Commented

shut up and take my power stones and add moar chaps.

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anotheridiot
anotheridiot
1 years ago
Commented

more i read more i need

anotheridiot
anotheridiot
2 years ago
Posted

its a nice story with intresting elements but there are some problem 1. please use 'AS' sparingly 2. use either grammerly or do a proof read before uploading there are some paragraphs where i tend to loose my brain cells while figuring out what's going on. anything else about this ff is great, I can't stop reading it

anotheridiot
anotheridiot
anotheridiot
anotheridiot
2 years ago
Commented

dont forget to add tsunade in his harem

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anotheridiot
anotheridiot
2 years ago
Commented

great chapter, now I have to wait for another chapter

anotheridiot
anotheridiot
2 years ago
Commented

what do you mean by another verse like are you going to send him to another world now?