Shadow_Assasin

Shadow_Assasin

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Shadow_Assasin
Shadow_Assasin
1 years ago
Replied to CovidCandy

I mean the reception always has to be close to MC's age for MC to have a good reason to have a sexual relationship with the receptionist. it's just so overused plot.

Within the armory, a plump, middle-aged lady donning a plain robe sat behind a marble counter. Her hair was ivory blonde, and her irises amber.

Born in Blood

Born in Blood

Fantasy · CovidCandy

Shadow_Assasin
Shadow_Assasin
1 years ago
Replied to Animosity

Author, I liked your book very much. but there is a thing that triggers me. and that is you putting a " lovely dovey husband and wife chat" in ch 5. For some people especially me, we can't cope with unrealistic story telling. I would rather you write something that sounds more realistic in mideaval era. Like because the coffee is too cold husband beat his wife to death and she passed away. yeah that sounds more like that era instead of wife telling husband that she will put cockroach in husband's meal. That is not realistic communication at all. Even in this era.

Shadow_Assasin
Shadow_Assasin
1 years ago
Commented

I love how like every other novel the age of the receptionist "unconsciously" doesn't match MC's age.

Within the armory, a plump, middle-aged lady donning a plain robe sat behind a marble counter. Her hair was ivory blonde, and her irises amber.

Born in Blood

Born in Blood

Fantasy · CovidCandy

Shadow_Assasin
Shadow_Assasin
1 years ago
Replied to Imagination9

that's why I am into marvel more.

Robin worriedly looked at Dante who spoke to answer the question. "Because it's not useful if you can't hit your opponent. What's the point of super strength if your opponent knocks you out before you can use it?"

Young Justice: Ghost

Young Justice: Ghost

Anime & Comics · Arokey

Shadow_Assasin
Shadow_Assasin
1 years ago
Posted

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Shadow_Assasin
Shadow_Assasin
1 years ago
Commented

Say no for "Nationalism".

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"Create a team that will come up with plans on how we can do it, also have them assess the impact of implementing each of them, I will decide based on the report" Said the president while looking at the secretary of defense.

Getting a Technology System in Modern Day

Getting a Technology System in Modern Day

Sci-fi · Agent_047

Shadow_Assasin
Shadow_Assasin
1 years ago
Commented

it reminds me of a famous story about Moses in Islam

As he was thrown out of the room the euphoria in his face replaced by the fear of what is to come, he prayed that the earth split and swallow him as a whole to save him from it.

Getting a Technology System in Modern Day

Getting a Technology System in Modern Day

Sci-fi · Agent_047

Shadow_Assasin
Shadow_Assasin
1 years ago
Replied to D_Wolf

To be fair I am kind of disgusted by this novel as I have read a far better version of it. This genre may be new to you but not me. But later I gave up. why? Because every single protoganist has to find problems with MC one way or another. It's like they are programmed NPC. Then comes the female leads. Their love for MC makes me cringe. But the story does have a variety of love stories with a variety of woman.

Shadow_Assasin
Shadow_Assasin
1 years ago
Replied to Shadow_Assasin

I mean I didn't tell you the second sentence but that's what I meant simply think about the novel carefully before having good opinions of it.