I really liked reading this book, and I am so sorry that this book did not make it all the way to the end. I One of the big reasons I like it so well is because it is a real story with real people. Best wishes to you. I feel you have real potential in the writing world.
Right you are. I thought the same thing.
Elias stared at the side of Lydia, where Adeline led as the maid of honor, accompanied by nameless socialites he didn't care about.
His Majesty's Devious Sins
Fantasy · Xincerely
A physical therapist and a massage therapist would/could work wonders. I keep wondering why they have not made that connection.
Adeline's entire body trembled when she tried to walk. She was holding tightly onto his hands for support, and he never wavered. She felt safe and strong with his guidance. So, she took slow, gradual steps, even though her legs were tingling with protest.
His Majesty's Devious Sins
Fantasy · Xincerely
It is not bravery if there is no fear.
"Then what the hell are we doing here?" Elias scoffed, his plan ruined by her surprising bravery.
His Majesty's Devious Sins
Fantasy · Xincerely
“gauge”, not “gouge….
The reason that Easton asked this question was to gouge her personality. Was she humble? Or did she like to brag? Was she strong on the inside, but weak on the outside? There were so many possibilities in self-introductions.
His Majesty's Devious Sins
Fantasy · Xincerely
Adeline has been conditioned by her aunt to not eat very much, so she would stay thin.
"Hmm, have some more," Elias ordered. He let her hold upon his tucked arm, as she eagerly ate the cookies from the plate. He watched her as she slowly licked the crumbs off her lips, chewed, and then swallowed. His eyes centered upon her soft, rosy lips.
His Majesty's Devious Sins
Fantasy · Xincerely
He just had surgery, you not-so-very-smart man. You think the doctors and nurses are all in on it, too???
Alaia wants to get back to the hospital to be with her father. So we will drop them off there on our way to work. Can't believe that old man almost threw all my work to shit. That heart attack better be real, otherwise, i will deal with him later.
Only For You
Urban · Bellamerce
I like the way the story is going so far. Kne thing you need to fix ASAP, though. You need to fix it whenever you are trying to say “i am” or “i’m” It is not “am…. as in “ I am going to the store” or “I’m going to the store…. not “am going to the store…. Again, great story! Have a great day!!!
A/N. How did you like this chapter??. So far it is one of my favorites as it has the most interaction between Ally and Nick.
Only For You
Urban · Bellamerce
Adversaries instead of adviseries ?
Delaney rolled her eyes but put her coins in her purse and followed Win to his table. She was ready for a challenge now anyways and Win only played against people he saw as true advisories.
My Once Handsome Husband
Fantasy · Erin_McLain_4927
“You’re” as in “you are”
Shuhei sighs. "I don't understand you sometimes. Why did you accept this offer even though your an idol?"
Eternal Melody
Urban · XOMatsumaeohana