Anxious_Buddha

Anxious_Buddha

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Anxious_Buddha
4 months ago
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It's good, but it would be better if the author didn't prolong the protagonist's introspection and slowed down the plot. The priest would be a great scapegoat for the future disappearance of children, but you killed him off almost in the same chapter you introduced him. Not to mention that taking justice into your own hands doesn't suit the Pennywise monster; okay, there's a person from our world in his body, but it's anticlimactic to read about a chaotic cosmic entity discussing morality with a pedophile priest.

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Anxious_Buddha
4 months ago
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Samuel had grown accustomed to seeing characters from games and movies come to life, and among the many orphans he had adopted and trained as agents, spies, or investigators, there was even a Chinese girl who loved wearing red clothes.

Reborn as Humanity’s Emperor Across the Multiverse

Reborn as Humanity’s Emperor Across the Multiverse

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Anxious_Buddha
4 months ago
Replied to Mordreut

No. A phylactery.

Seimei explained: "I fixed my soul to the ninja tools. As long as the tools exist, my soul naturally won't be pulled away by the Pure Land."

Unhinged Uchiha Survivor

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Anxious_Buddha
4 months ago
Replied to PrimordialDesolate

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Anxious_Buddha
5 months ago
Replied to ØNE

I also want to know, what chapter are you on now?

Anxious_Buddha
Anxious_Buddha
5 months ago
Posted

I can only say that it was a good attempt; if the author had bothered to revise the AI-generated text and cut out the nonsensical parts, it would have been a good story, but unfortunately that doesn't happen. The text is full of redundancies and was visibly done by AI, mainly because every paragraph has some italicized thought from the protagonist, and speaking of the protagonist, he's kind of Chuunibyou, saying things that are cringeworthy and nothing like what you'd expect from a drug dealer. Okay, he wasn't a drug dealer in his previous life, but he should be an adult man, right? But there are many parts that give the impression that he was just a teenager or child. In addition, it would be interesting if the author didn't skip so many scenes and focused on developing them; not that it's wrong to skip parts, but it's terrible when the protagonist is about to do something important and that something is cut off by the author who inserts a scene hours later explaining what happened.

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Anxious_Buddha
5 months ago
Commented

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Tony was a notorious playboy, a total man-whore. The women he'd fucked had way better bodies than Pepper, prettier faces, and completely eclipsed her in terms of class and education.

Marvel: The Villain

Marvel: The Villain

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Anxious_Buddha
6 months ago
Replied to CRUZEN

Not to defend the author, but it has already been specified that his system is tied to the overall growth of the Uchiha clan's strength. Since the clan's relocation, the Uchiha must have improved their combat strength somewhat, and without even mentioning the marriages that have occurred, it's not so surreal that Yuzuru has become so strong.

Anxious_Buddha
Anxious_Buddha
6 months ago
Commented

*Itachi*

"We must learn from Uchiha Yasushi! Even he could ruthlessly act against his own clansmen. Naturally we can too!"

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Unhinged Uchiha Survivor

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