Nivritti is in your other book, dear...
Nivritti hit Henry on the back of his head and informed, "no, not suspended but have to take leave without pay. You guys will be responsible for interrogating Zion. Oh! Stupid Chief Hudson!! He wasted so much time. I would have started the interrogation by now." She gritted her teeth and stomp her foot on the ground.
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Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0
I don't just like it...
Correction: Can we meet in the middle?
"Can we meet in middle? We have to send a message that no seniors can hit their juniors. That's not how NYPD works," pleaded Hudson.
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Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0
Punnctuation Error: no report of Henry in a hospital, as the fight between Bobby and Journee
For minutes, Hudson sat inside the breakroom and kept making phone calls. He called every hospital within 20 miles to ask if anyone named Henry was ever admitted. Lucky for Journee and Henry, there was no report of Henry in a hospital as the fight between Bobby and Journee distracted the nurses from ever entering Henry into their system. And the medicine was given to him by David.
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Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0
Correction: For hours,
For minutes, Hudson sat inside the breakroom and kept making phone calls. He called every hospital within 20 miles to ask if anyone named Henry was ever admitted. Lucky for Journee and Henry, there was no report of Henry in a hospital as the fight between Bobby and Journee distracted the nurses from ever entering Henry into their system. And the medicine was given to him by David.
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Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0
Correction?: I am not sure if it should be Hall Crime Family and Hall Crime Syndicate with consistency of each of these words (when clustered together, of course) being capitalized or not. Might want to doublecheck with a professional editor on this matter.
"The whole family that was killed and is tied to the Hall Crime syndicate?" asked Hudson.
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Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0
Correction: But it would be better if you answer as many questions as he asks, and answer truthfully.
"Remember, if you don't feel like answering his questions, we can stop the interrogation at any time and continue later on. He cannot force you to answer and you don't have to reply to him on things where you can implicate yourself. But it would be better if you reply to as many questions he asks and answers truthfully," suggested Angela. Kimberly nodded and both looked at Hudson.
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Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0
Correction: Angela walked away with Jack. After a few minutes, Journee came out of the room to follow Angela and Jack.
"Relax! Take Angela with you and go. Don't waste time," said Journee. Angela walked away with Jack and Journee after a few minutes came out of the room and walked behind Jack and Angela. She too wanted to go inside the cabin, but she stopped herself outside the captain's cabin.
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Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0
No, you left out the "l" in "flinched". sorry if that was confusing using the quotation marks.
The room grew colder as Storm's expression turned icy. "Know your place, Ivan!" I finched, the warning was clear in his tone. "You forget your place. Snow is my son, and he is your Alpha."
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Fantasy · BaeVida