I donated my power stones any chance they can be made into his Kyler crystal ?
Please donate some of your power stones, it would help my ff massivelv.
The Multiverse Hunter
Anime & Comics · Rondo_1
Makes sense
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A Multiversal Journey (GOT/ASOIAF)
TV · Shalini_Mishra_6542
Makes sense sorry bout that if it came off a little rude😌I’ll leave my own reservations out of my comments as to not screw with your style or thought process can wait for more chapters 👍
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A Multiversal Journey (GOT/ASOIAF)
TV · Shalini_Mishra_6542
A cool idea you could introduce to combat how op he is is he can only use so much power in certain worlds otherwise the “will of the world” will start changing the world like if he spawns in to huge of an army the world will increase the worlds population or something like that so he can still be OP but if he acts without care he can get harmed or better yet kicked out of said world or something like that idk 🤷 just me spouting nonsense no need to make it fact in the story just thought it would provide some inspiration for the story
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A Multiversal Journey (GOT/ASOIAF)
TV · Shalini_Mishra_6542
No im just being dramatic for the sake of it also noticed it happens a lot in GOT fanfics so… was like another one ☝️ but it’s fine lol not gonna make me not read the story just something I’m not personally interested in so write what you want I’ll still read and offer support 👍
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A Multiversal Journey (GOT/ASOIAF)
TV · Shalini_Mishra_6542
Thought so I read a fanfic were the mc got given wishes by an alternate multiverseal self that was hyper evil and wanted someone of equal power to fight him and another were the god was mc just in the future it just got confusing because of time and space rules always being confusing and quite random lol
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A Multiversal Journey (GOT/ASOIAF)
TV · Shalini_Mishra_6542
Mc is quite op your going slow which is nice but I will say a time skip would be recommended from ages 5-9 and on his 9th birthday he’ll meet the starks or something like that like say he’s in the tutorial mode now and can’t leave his land
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A Multiversal Journey (GOT/ASOIAF)
TV · Shalini_Mishra_6542
I think the story is going quite well it might look good If the mc changes the castle to make it look more regal he can make guardians/soldiers to fill his lands, also there ravens have him create the brotherhood from assasins creed or the god (author) have it in there past that they are Assassins that fight against the fire priests instead of the Templar’s idk lol 😝
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A Multiversal Journey (GOT/ASOIAF)
TV · Shalini_Mishra_6542
I new this was inevitable why did I think it wouldn’t happen if I asked 😞
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A Multiversal Journey (GOT/ASOIAF)
TV · Shalini_Mishra_6542
They kinda look Elvin from the lord of the rings in a way can’t put my finger on it it just seems elvish idk
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A Multiversal Journey (GOT/ASOIAF)
TV · Shalini_Mishra_6542