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Aokara
Hmmm i could see that there is some improvement. Keep it up.
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Fantasy · lon_okami
Aokara
Hmm... hiding his ability like Kiyopon, I see...
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Aokara
Oh ho ho. The turning point is near.
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Aokara
oh boy oh boy
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Fantasy · lon_okami
Aokara
Me, a math nerd, be like: wait til you get to linear law.
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Fantasy · lon_okami
Aokara
awww... I was hoping Sui-san would fight. Well, that was a good fight though!
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Aokara
hohoho...
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Fantasy · lon_okami
Aokara
Hmm... interesting. You like Genshin? Well, this chapter is pretty good. Easy to understand for a guy like me who gets bored really easily.
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Fantasy · lon_okami
For now, since it is just the first chapter, I won't be making a detailed review. All I can say for now is keep up the good work! I will be waiting for the next chapter when it arrives.
Soul for a Girlfriend?
Realistic · lon_okami